Whirring stunts
A killer is dangerous yet useful2 total reviews
Comment from justjo66
I'm sorry but your poem does not meet the contest rules. You should have 3 lines of 5-7-5. You should go back and review the contest rules. Also, you can google syllable counter and find some help on the innernet. I found it hard to count syllables at first but you will learn. Just keep working.
I'm also, sorry, but your last line needs some explaination in the notes or something. I don't get your meaning.
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I'm sorry but your poem does not meet the contest rules. You should have 3 lines of 5-7-5. You should go back and review the contest rules. Also, you can google syllable counter and find some help on the innernet. I found it hard to count syllables at first but you will learn. Just keep working.
I'm also, sorry, but your last line needs some explaination in the notes or something. I don't get your meaning.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2011
Comment from Earl of Oxford
I'm afraid you haven't adhered to the contest rules which require 3 line containing a syllable count of '5-7-5'. Your lines are written in '7-12-7'.
Maybe I'm dim, but I don't get your message. However, I'm intreagued.
Earl
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I'm afraid you haven't adhered to the contest rules which require 3 line containing a syllable count of '5-7-5'. Your lines are written in '7-12-7'.
Maybe I'm dim, but I don't get your message. However, I'm intreagued.
Earl
Comment Written 11-Nov-2011
