The Poet`s Life
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Comment from TammyGail
I won't sue you :) Lol
I loved this poem Bicpen what a witty man you are
It was well written and funny as hell
Great format and imagery thanks for sharing it was a pleasure..
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2011
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I won't sue you :) Lol
I loved this poem Bicpen what a witty man you are
It was well written and funny as hell
Great format and imagery thanks for sharing it was a pleasure..
Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2011
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Excellent Tammy...made one slight adjustment see if you can notice next time you look it up...lol.
Comment from Tom C. Adams
bic pen, great idea. so creative. Here is hoping the judges see it as favorably as I do! Nicely done, I wish you good luck in the contest
Tom C. Adams
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bic pen, great idea. so creative. Here is hoping the judges see it as favorably as I do! Nicely done, I wish you good luck in the contest
Tom C. Adams
Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2011
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Excellent, cheers tom...was having a bit of fun and after a few adjustments thought it might have a chance, many thanks.
Comment from bowls
Very clever. There are lots of things going on in this poem. First, the play on "right" and "write". Especially good in light of the name you've assumed. I also like the internal rhyme of the last line. It underlines the loudness of the shout. Nice end rhyme, too, to keep the poem moving along at a good clip. The acrostic aspect of the poem is an additional plus. Good job.
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Very clever. There are lots of things going on in this poem. First, the play on "right" and "write". Especially good in light of the name you've assumed. I also like the internal rhyme of the last line. It underlines the loudness of the shout. Nice end rhyme, too, to keep the poem moving along at a good clip. The acrostic aspect of the poem is an additional plus. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
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Excellent, glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Rama Rao
A short fine Acrostic which made good reading.
The inverted commas before C and N spoiled the fun in a way.I am sure neither your pen nor your ID has these punctuation marks within.
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A short fine Acrostic which made good reading.
The inverted commas before C and N spoiled the fun in a way.I am sure neither your pen nor your ID has these punctuation marks within.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
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No they dont but because it is the start of a speech or part of speech being exclaimed I thought it was only right to include correct punctuation as far as I can see...I think it adds to the fun...
Comment from Janie King
Well, that is very clever and well-done..I'm not a poet..but after much reviewing of poems I decided to try a couple acrostics...they reviews we great but that's as far as I have ventured into the poetic world. God bless.
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Well, that is very clever and well-done..I'm not a poet..but after much reviewing of poems I decided to try a couple acrostics...they reviews we great but that's as far as I have ventured into the poetic world. God bless.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
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Thank you Janie...just having a bit of fun also...
Comment from kleck140
Clever style of writing poetry. I need to learn more about
the different styles of poetry. I am a real novice here.
But your message came through to me. Thanks for sharing.
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Clever style of writing poetry. I need to learn more about
the different styles of poetry. I am a real novice here.
But your message came through to me. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2011
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Excellent Kleck...try one or two different styles and try to understand their techniques and beauty then if you feel like it move on...
Comment from Chuck23
I think Bicpen is an awesome name to write under. Your acrostic was fun to read! Did you separate the sentence from the first letter to make the acrostic stand out?
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I think Bicpen is an awesome name to write under. Your acrostic was fun to read! Did you separate the sentence from the first letter to make the acrostic stand out?
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
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Yes is the answer and I was having a little bit of fun...
Comment from patsolstad
This is a very creative acrostic. And the rhyming is an 'extra added attraction.' I also like the long 'i' sound of several words in the poem. Nice!
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This is a very creative acrostic. And the rhyming is an 'extra added attraction.' I also like the long 'i' sound of several words in the poem. Nice!
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2011
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Excellent glad you enjoyed...
