The Poet`s Life
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18 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
I like that image.
This reads well and makes sense.
Sparks many ideas between the lines.
Flows well and has impact.
Talk about relating!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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I like that image.
This reads well and makes sense.
Sparks many ideas between the lines.
Flows well and has impact.
Talk about relating!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from Kevin C
I like the progression of your thoughts from the first poem this fits so well. You appear to show the reader the heart of the poet a little bit more. It reads again so well and flows great. Nicely done!
Kevin
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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I like the progression of your thoughts from the first poem this fits so well. You appear to show the reader the heart of the poet a little bit more. It reads again so well and flows great. Nicely done!
Kevin
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Maybe you could check out the poem in its entire form to the conclusion ... that is what this book is about, maybe you will find some encouragement
Comment from 9999pool
There are a few hidden messages in this poem. The 'rights' are in italics meaning, 'writing that is right' or 'write what's right'. Syllable and syllable count is a golden rule for some poem genre. There is rhyming and alliteration beside the meter and rhythm. Note the rhyming couplets.
We can shout in the poem if we have a very good understanding of what a poem is and how to begin writing one with some level of professionalism and flair. Good advice and expressions. Training the trainer perhaps? LOL. Cheers, Ritciesszzky.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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There are a few hidden messages in this poem. The 'rights' are in italics meaning, 'writing that is right' or 'write what's right'. Syllable and syllable count is a golden rule for some poem genre. There is rhyming and alliteration beside the meter and rhythm. Note the rhyming couplets.
We can shout in the poem if we have a very good understanding of what a poem is and how to begin writing one with some level of professionalism and flair. Good advice and expressions. Training the trainer perhaps? LOL. Cheers, Ritciesszzky.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Many thanks ... intresting !!!
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Welcome, cheers, Ritchiesszzky.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent rhyming and flow of lines. I like the inner soul of the poet coming out here and the struggle to write. I like the line Now, no more doubt, let us shout! It encourages the poet to keep writing.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Excellent rhyming and flow of lines. I like the inner soul of the poet coming out here and the struggle to write. I like the line Now, no more doubt, let us shout! It encourages the poet to keep writing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Just out of curiosity ... can I ask why you did not review the rest of the book.
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I am going back and forth to my computer today, doing household chores. I will get back to your book. Elaine
Comment from Bobbi22
Another great poem about a poet's life. I love the language and the dialogue. I am looking forward to continuing the journey through a poet's life.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Another great poem about a poet's life. I love the language and the dialogue. I am looking forward to continuing the journey through a poet's life.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Excellent I have to wait for the next instalment of inspiration.
Comment from Mastery
Congratulations, Bicpen on being in the winner's circle for your poem in the new arrival category. Your acrostic is original and is well done. Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Congratulations, Bicpen on being in the winner's circle for your poem in the new arrival category. Your acrostic is original and is well done. Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 08-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Many thanks Bob...much appreciated.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write in acrostic poem it was well written and displayed. I like the words and the decoration of the words. A good write.Mary
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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A good write in acrostic poem it was well written and displayed. I like the words and the decoration of the words. A good write.Mary
Comment Written 08-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Many thanks Mary...much appreciated.
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem is very creative and I enjoyed reading about your pen.Your poem has good description of your dilemma also good smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Your poem is very creative and I enjoyed reading about your pen.Your poem has good description of your dilemma also good smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 10-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Many thanks Rita...
Comment from WilliamDeen
Great Acrostic poem of Bic Pen. Cute poem about the Bic Pen with a nice rhyming scheme to it and the cadence is nice and smooth.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Great Acrostic poem of Bic Pen. Cute poem about the Bic Pen with a nice rhyming scheme to it and the cadence is nice and smooth.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Excellent many thanks WD...
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem very much, Bicpen. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I'm the opposite, I never counted syllables until I came to this site. Now I count sometimes.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem very much, Bicpen. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I'm the opposite, I never counted syllables until I came to this site. Now I count sometimes.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Thank you PG...it is not always necessary to do so execpt when writing in set meters.
