Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from write hand blue
Another of your interesting writes.
A tale with good visual and an
authentic feel.Good work.
WHB...
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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Another of your interesting writes.
A tale with good visual and an
authentic feel.Good work.
WHB...
Comment Written 07-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cheryl Baker
Another enjoyable episode of you novel "Lonely Hearts Meet". This is a good read, engaging from start to finish. At last Peggy Rodgers is in custody where she aught to be. Well done. I look forward to the next chapter.
Cheryl
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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Another enjoyable episode of you novel "Lonely Hearts Meet". This is a good read, engaging from start to finish. At last Peggy Rodgers is in custody where she aught to be. Well done. I look forward to the next chapter.
Cheryl
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
You continue to provide excellent information about
the side details included in this novel, such as
the timing for hepatitis B vaccines as well as much
information about what women involved in domestic
violence situations have to deal with -- please keep
up the excellent work
janlove,
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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barbara:
You continue to provide excellent information about
the side details included in this novel, such as
the timing for hepatitis B vaccines as well as much
information about what women involved in domestic
violence situations have to deal with -- please keep
up the excellent work
janlove,
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Connie P
I'm glad things turned in Anna's favor. I'm wondering how the Rodger's attorney got hold of Troy's medical records, isn't that supposed to be protected by law. I'm really hoping Troy gets a chance with Anna, but there sure are a lot of complications.
Connie
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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I'm glad things turned in Anna's favor. I'm wondering how the Rodger's attorney got hold of Troy's medical records, isn't that supposed to be protected by law. I'm really hoping Troy gets a chance with Anna, but there sure are a lot of complications.
Connie
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
chapter thirty-eight was exciting and wonderfully written. Yeah, Paul's detective found crap on that nasty mother-in-law. The bitch got what she deserved. I loved this chapter because the hateful ex mother-in-law went straight to jell. Anna is scared of her ex getting out and killing her. So from your author notes this is a long book, but I look forward to reading it, you are a top notch writer. Your descriptive writing is excellent in your chapter. Your dialogue is great and drives along the story. You are good at showing and not telling. I look forward to reading more. I'm sick with fever from my bad bladder infection and the antibiotics I'm taking are powerful and give me diarrhea. I hope your doing fine. I can't take the flu shot because I'm very allergic to eggs. I'd recommend chapter thirty-nine for your riveting court room scene. It's like I were watching The Good Wife- my favorite show. Please have a super day, my friend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Barbara,
chapter thirty-eight was exciting and wonderfully written. Yeah, Paul's detective found crap on that nasty mother-in-law. The bitch got what she deserved. I loved this chapter because the hateful ex mother-in-law went straight to jell. Anna is scared of her ex getting out and killing her. So from your author notes this is a long book, but I look forward to reading it, you are a top notch writer. Your descriptive writing is excellent in your chapter. Your dialogue is great and drives along the story. You are good at showing and not telling. I look forward to reading more. I'm sick with fever from my bad bladder infection and the antibiotics I'm taking are powerful and give me diarrhea. I hope your doing fine. I can't take the flu shot because I'm very allergic to eggs. I'd recommend chapter thirty-nine for your riveting court room scene. It's like I were watching The Good Wife- my favorite show. Please have a super day, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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I am sorry you are still not feeling well. I am very worried about you and will continue to pray for you,
Comment from axelbeariter
"I might lose Michael." The Rodgers' attorney made me look like the worst mother on Earth."/Take out the quotation mark after Michael, if this is Anna speaking.----Anna sighed and placed her fork on her plate./Great hook. The tension continues. Another chapter with a twist that surprised the reader. Great job.
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"I might lose Michael." The Rodgers' attorney made me look like the worst mother on Earth."/Take out the quotation mark after Michael, if this is Anna speaking.----Anna sighed and placed her fork on her plate./Great hook. The tension continues. Another chapter with a twist that surprised the reader. Great job.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for catching the error. I will correct it. I appreciate the help. I am amazed nobody else caught it.
Comment from purrfect tale
I'm so glad she got to keep her son. I've been worried about it for the last couple chapters. I found on little thing.
Do you know how much of a threat is this disease to the minor child in question?" - your "is" is in the wrong place,oops
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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I'm so glad she got to keep her son. I've been worried about it for the last couple chapters. I found on little thing.
Do you know how much of a threat is this disease to the minor child in question?" - your "is" is in the wrong place,oops
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for catching that. I am shocked more people didn't see it. I do appreciate the catch.
Comment from Mariea
Good morning Barbara. Another well written chapter with thorough editing. Characters and dialogue still consistent and without clutter. The final paragraph is a great suspense builder.
Hugs Mia
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Good morning Barbara. Another well written chapter with thorough editing. Characters and dialogue still consistent and without clutter. The final paragraph is a great suspense builder.
Hugs Mia
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
Lonely Hearts Meet! Another great chapter. This is very well written it held my interest. I like the flow. What a story. Nicely done! Deorre
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Lonely Hearts Meet! Another great chapter. This is very well written it held my interest. I like the flow. What a story. Nicely done! Deorre
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from wiljacro
HI! Barbara,I came upon your story,well into the court hearing, but must admit to being completely, on Anna's side. So, am now looking forward to the next chapter with anticipation, and hope that when Bobby gets out of jail, the excitement and tension, will continue to the same high caliber. wiljacro.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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HI! Barbara,I came upon your story,well into the court hearing, but must admit to being completely, on Anna's side. So, am now looking forward to the next chapter with anticipation, and hope that when Bobby gets out of jail, the excitement and tension, will continue to the same high caliber. wiljacro.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
