Where's my.....?
I'm sure you know this feeling!116 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
congratulations man you are the best.
funny but not funny to the hilt.what a bute
great flow and story and rhymes and rhythmZelick
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2011
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congratulations man you are the best.
funny but not funny to the hilt.what a bute
great flow and story and rhymes and rhythmZelick
Comment Written 07-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Z. Glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi kiwisteveh
Absolutely know the feelings described here - even know the ability to lose the same things!
Very amusingly put across, nice rhythm to it. Well done.
Patrick
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Hi kiwisteveh
Absolutely know the feelings described here - even know the ability to lose the same things!
Very amusingly put across, nice rhythm to it. Well done.
Patrick
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Patrick. I'll put the popularity of this poem down to the fact that everyone knows how this feels, although I notice a few reviewers claiming it is their spouse who always loses things!
Steve
Comment from gypsynet
lol.. i hope this is not dementia, just delicious kind of humor that tickles the fnnny bone... the rhymes are playful and set the mood of the story.. great flow of thought that brings te hous sown with laughter... a grrat work! :)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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lol.. i hope this is not dementia, just delicious kind of humor that tickles the fnnny bone... the rhymes are playful and set the mood of the story.. great flow of thought that brings te hous sown with laughter... a grrat work! :)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind words.
Steve
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Loved the humour and the internal voice here...could almost hear the rambling frustration. The rhymes were effortless, great job.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Loved the humour and the internal voice here...could almost hear the rambling frustration. The rhymes were effortless, great job.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Karen.
Little kids and senile old folk seem to be the voices I manage best!
Steve
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Ha ha... shouldn't laugh
but this is a bit like
the love of my life, always
misplacing things.. since
he puts them in the most
strange places... and guess
who has to find them!!
If I don't ask (when we are
going out the door) have you
got your glasses, got your
wallet and your keys and so on,
with him answering "yes" "yes" "yes"...
then he's sure to come out without
them.
Tis no wonder you won... congratulations,
my friend.. so deserved.
Margaret
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Ha ha... shouldn't laugh
but this is a bit like
the love of my life, always
misplacing things.. since
he puts them in the most
strange places... and guess
who has to find them!!
If I don't ask (when we are
going out the door) have you
got your glasses, got your
wallet and your keys and so on,
with him answering "yes" "yes" "yes"...
then he's sure to come out without
them.
Tis no wonder you won... congratulations,
my friend.. so deserved.
Margaret
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Margaret.
I have an interesting split of those who admit having this habit themselves and those who blame it all on the spouse!
Steve
Comment from Vladilynn
A winner indeed that's for sure!!! Loved every bit of it:)
It seems like me, I forgot anything, if my butt is not attach on me, I'll bet, will be losing that too!
Well written and very funny even is not really kewl forgetting everything...still makes me laughed!
I'm glad is not only me! Lmao!
Love much
Lynn:0)
nice meeting you!!!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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A winner indeed that's for sure!!! Loved every bit of it:)
It seems like me, I forgot anything, if my butt is not attach on me, I'll bet, will be losing that too!
Well written and very funny even is not really kewl forgetting everything...still makes me laughed!
I'm glad is not only me! Lmao!
Love much
Lynn:0)
nice meeting you!!!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Lynn.
I'm glad you got a laugh out of my poem.
Steve
Comment from God's Writer
A wonderful and funny poem Steve. Thank you. I needed a laugh today. Very well written with humor dripping from each and every line. Your rhyming so well done it melted so well with the poem I had to go back and look to see if you even rhymed at all. Great job!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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A wonderful and funny poem Steve. Thank you. I needed a laugh today. Very well written with humor dripping from each and every line. Your rhyming so well done it melted so well with the poem I had to go back and look to see if you even rhymed at all. Great job!!!!!!!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Thank you so much for the kind words.
I am always thrilled when a reader tells me they got a good chuckle from my work. You may be surprised by my latest piece where the laugh doesn't come until the end of 150+ lines...
Steve
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I will look for it.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
The end made me laugh and I'm always loosing stuff. I put my keys down so I don't loose them and then I forget where I put them so I wouldn't loose them. You search high and low only to find the one open spot you check last and you didn't look in the beginning only to find them an hour later.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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The end made me laugh and I'm always loosing stuff. I put my keys down so I don't loose them and then I forget where I put them so I wouldn't loose them. You search high and low only to find the one open spot you check last and you didn't look in the beginning only to find them an hour later.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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Thanks for the review and the kind words - yes, I think this is a universal experience.
Steve
Comment from Sweet Anita
LOL Steve. I can see how this won the contest. It is funny, but not funny if you are getting old and forgetful.. But you don't have to be old to be absent minded. My son is always leaving his wallet or keys laying around here then calling to see if I can find them for him. Thanks for the laughs.
Nita
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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LOL Steve. I can see how this won the contest. It is funny, but not funny if you are getting old and forgetful.. But you don't have to be old to be absent minded. My son is always leaving his wallet or keys laying around here then calling to see if I can find them for him. Thanks for the laughs.
Nita
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Nita - I think this won because everyone can relate to it.
Steve
Comment from Judian James
Hey there. Congrats on the win. I certainly can understand why this won the prize. A really good romp that brought a laugh about aging. Excellent (I think you'd get a kick out of my piece, "Youthful Flair" !)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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Hey there. Congrats on the win. I certainly can understand why this won the prize. A really good romp that brought a laugh about aging. Excellent (I think you'd get a kick out of my piece, "Youthful Flair" !)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Judian.
I am certain I already replied to this review, so forgive me if this appears twice. I managed to track down your piece - what a prolific writer you are - I found the easiest way to get to it was to google it! A slightly more sobering take on aging than mine, but certainly thought-provoking.
Steve
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When you open someone's portfolio, scroll down to the bottom of that first chronological page and you'll see "search portfolio" in blue. Click on that and the portfolio then drops down in alphabetical order! Sorry, I just assumed you knew. Yes, it must have taken ages and much frustration before you found it.
Did you have a laugh? Thank you
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Ah, you learm something every day - I think I may have tried looking elsewhere for a 'search' function, but have never noticed it there in the portfolio. I actually scrolled through about 10 pages before going to Plan B - that actually worked really well - I just googled your name, Fanstory and title and it took me straight to it.
Thanks for the tip.
Steve
