Witness
The Unimagineable86 total reviews
Comment from babylonia
bob,
the picture definitely goes with the piece. definitely makes a person think but then it is supposed to. imagery is excellent. best of luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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bob,
the picture definitely goes with the piece. definitely makes a person think but then it is supposed to. imagery is excellent. best of luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hi,Barb..LOng time no hear from. Thanks so much fro reviewing this. I will keep an eye out again for your work also. Bob
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Bob,
You are very welcome. I sort got trapped in the facebook zone but I'm back. Start the nano tomorrow. Can't wait.
Love,
Barbara
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey Bob,
I did not have any trouble reading this magnificent ABC entry. That day and the many days since are stained with blood and human emotions. I know I will never be the same. Again great entry
Bear
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hey Bob,
I did not have any trouble reading this magnificent ABC entry. That day and the many days since are stained with blood and human emotions. I know I will never be the same. Again great entry
Bear
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much, Bear. I do appreciate this. Bob
Comment from the blue pixel
I was watching the 10.00 pm news in Melbourne when this horror story unfolded and I couldn't help but go right back to the day when I stood, looking at the amazing view from one of the towers. It's strange how human beings take things very personally if it has touched them in some way but in this case, it touched everyone whether they had been there or not. Next year, I am going to New York City and I am trying to imagine what the space looks like now. Even though I have seen many stories and seen what they have done with the space, I am sure that I will staggered by the actual size and sight of it. "Scenes embedded forever" is so right, regardless of where in the world people may live. Beautifully written, as always my friend. xx Pix
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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I was watching the 10.00 pm news in Melbourne when this horror story unfolded and I couldn't help but go right back to the day when I stood, looking at the amazing view from one of the towers. It's strange how human beings take things very personally if it has touched them in some way but in this case, it touched everyone whether they had been there or not. Next year, I am going to New York City and I am trying to imagine what the space looks like now. Even though I have seen many stories and seen what they have done with the space, I am sure that I will staggered by the actual size and sight of it. "Scenes embedded forever" is so right, regardless of where in the world people may live. Beautifully written, as always my friend. xx Pix
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hi, Carol..Yes, you are in for a treat...but if yu could have visited the twinntowers before they came down...you would realize the real tragedy involved besides lives of course. Bob
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I did visit them Bob and I was up on the top and from that height, the Statue of Liberty was about one inch high. What an amazing view and what I terribe terrible tragedy. Thank you Bob.
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Bob, Excellent poem. I hope we always remember this terrible day and pay tribute to it. Best of luck in the contest. You are right the scenes are embedded forever. Wonderful picture. Shirley
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Dear Bob, Excellent poem. I hope we always remember this terrible day and pay tribute to it. Best of luck in the contest. You are right the scenes are embedded forever. Wonderful picture. Shirley
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much, Shirley. Your six stars looks so good on my wall...LOL..Take care of yourself...Bob
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I am sure I will be writing again soon.
Comment from Razz
Restless world
Surprise attack
Twins erupt and tumble
Unbelievable horror
Scene embedded forever.
So very painful still.
Written with much emotion. Great word usage.
Good writing.
Good luck in contest.
Razz
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Restless world
Surprise attack
Twins erupt and tumble
Unbelievable horror
Scene embedded forever.
So very painful still.
Written with much emotion. Great word usage.
Good writing.
Good luck in contest.
Razz
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hi, Razz. Thanks for taking the time to review this one...Bob
Comment from Bayberry
The painful loss to everyone comes through very clearly in this ABC poetry. It touches the heart at many levels. Thank you for posting this reminder that we must take care and do whatever is necessary to avoid a repetition. Best wishes in the contest with your excellent entry.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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The painful loss to everyone comes through very clearly in this ABC poetry. It touches the heart at many levels. Thank you for posting this reminder that we must take care and do whatever is necessary to avoid a repetition. Best wishes in the contest with your excellent entry.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much, Josie (love that name btw) I appreciate it very much. Bob
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Thanks so much, Josie (love that name btw) I appreciate it very much. The six stars are spectacular! Bob
Comment from MizKat
Bob - Your poem about the twin towers is very good, although sad. You did a wonderful job in writing your ABC poem. Kat
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Bob - Your poem about the twin towers is very good, although sad. You did a wonderful job in writing your ABC poem. Kat
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much, Kat. Where ya been? Bob
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I've been sick a lot so I haven't be on here much. Just when I start feeling better something else crops up. Fun - Fun. LOL Kat
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Sorry to hear that, Kat. Bob
Comment from Sweet Anita
This brings back those memories so vividly to me and I'm sure to many others who read your poem. It is one of those events that you remember exactly what you were doing that day when you heard the news. Very skillfully written and aheres to the rules of the contest. Good luck in the contest.
Nita :-)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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This brings back those memories so vividly to me and I'm sure to many others who read your poem. It is one of those events that you remember exactly what you were doing that day when you heard the news. Very skillfully written and aheres to the rules of the contest. Good luck in the contest.
Nita :-)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hi, Nita...Thanks so much. Now I know why they call you "sweet" Bob
Comment from Gungalo
This is one occurrence that will last forever in our minds. We were not ready and we did not protect our country the way it should have been.
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This is one occurrence that will last forever in our minds. We were not ready and we did not protect our country the way it should have been.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hi, Pam. Yes...So true. Thanks so much...Bob
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Agreed.
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is a creative and inspired contest entry, Bob. You've made a powerful statement through the use of active verbs and complex imagery. Good luck in the contest with this gem. Kind regards, Bev
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This is a creative and inspired contest entry, Bob. You've made a powerful statement through the use of active verbs and complex imagery. Good luck in the contest with this gem. Kind regards, Bev
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hi, Bev. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. Bob
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You're most welcome, Bob.
