A song aboot a Bonny dreamin' Lass
Whit can yea say that's no' been said before.15 total reviews
Comment from cherylmelwoods
I see you need one more review for this wonderful poem to be recognised so here it is ! Congratulations! I so wish I could listen to the audio.
I have the virtue of much patience being a Capricorn and I fully appreciate the vernacular tenfold!! The Scottish sound is so unique and as you say certainly is an experience that differs from the usual!
Why in the world would someone say your humor is of the bathroom type and very much disliked?? Who would be so rude and so bold? Take it from a conservative lady ( moi) that this is not true. Decidedly not true!!
People's audacity never ceases to amaze me! And be assured you are indeed " a gift to all those who are a wee bit down!"
Cheryl. ( pardon any spelling errors as I'm on my iPhone and it is easy to touch the wrong key with each being so close. My computer is for the timebeing, broken. )
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I see you need one more review for this wonderful poem to be recognised so here it is ! Congratulations! I so wish I could listen to the audio.
I have the virtue of much patience being a Capricorn and I fully appreciate the vernacular tenfold!! The Scottish sound is so unique and as you say certainly is an experience that differs from the usual!
Why in the world would someone say your humor is of the bathroom type and very much disliked?? Who would be so rude and so bold? Take it from a conservative lady ( moi) that this is not true. Decidedly not true!!
People's audacity never ceases to amaze me! And be assured you are indeed " a gift to all those who are a wee bit down!"
Cheryl. ( pardon any spelling errors as I'm on my iPhone and it is easy to touch the wrong key with each being so close. My computer is for the timebeing, broken. )
Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
Comment from gazzagodbod
love your work my friend and the fact you can listen to your words to soak up the wonderful accent and poem thanks gazzagodbod
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love your work my friend and the fact you can listen to your words to soak up the wonderful accent and poem thanks gazzagodbod
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
a great tribute to
sweet Anita.. her
song and voice (I took
it to be her voice) is
absolutely amazing...
she's so gifted.
I played her song twice... so lovely.
Margaret
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a great tribute to
sweet Anita.. her
song and voice (I took
it to be her voice) is
absolutely amazing...
she's so gifted.
I played her song twice... so lovely.
Margaret
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
Comment from robina1978
What a great poem about this wee lass that wanders away from home and can sing so well.
But in the end she realises where she belongs and goes back home.
Think this happens to so many girls when they are young. Fortunately this has a good ending.
Flows and rhymes so well.
Most of us can relate to this having been there or knowing of some one.
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What a great poem about this wee lass that wanders away from home and can sing so well.
But in the end she realises where she belongs and goes back home.
Think this happens to so many girls when they are young. Fortunately this has a good ending.
Flows and rhymes so well.
Most of us can relate to this having been there or knowing of some one.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
Comment from Espresso momma
She's a good one I agree. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and likes of her talents. Not everyone hears or reads her works, so this should encourage it. Thanks.
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She's a good one I agree. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and likes of her talents. Not everyone hears or reads her works, so this should encourage it. Thanks.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
Comment from purrfect tale
This is sweetly sentimental. I bet Anita cried when she read it. It's a wonderful tribute to her, her song, and to your friendship.
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This is sweetly sentimental. I bet Anita cried when she read it. It's a wonderful tribute to her, her song, and to your friendship.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
Comment from TammyGail
Well .. How great was this
Very cool indeed
I enjoyed it to the full
Great notes and reading
Great imagery as well thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
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Well .. How great was this
Very cool indeed
I enjoyed it to the full
Great notes and reading
Great imagery as well thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
Comment from Sweet Anita
Alex...I am so honored with this poem you've written about one of my songs. I don't feel deserving of this honor, but I know that is just the kind of wonderful person you are, to think of others, before yourself, when you have such an abundance of talent yourself. I have only been on this site for a couple of weeks, but your posts were the first I discovered, with the charming Scottish brogue. I am so fortunate to have found this site and am thankful for the many new friends I have found here, yourself being at the topa' the list. Thank you for this poem. I loved it. I've already given you too many stars I guess. You only get a five this time Auld Yin. :-)
Nita
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Alex...I am so honored with this poem you've written about one of my songs. I don't feel deserving of this honor, but I know that is just the kind of wonderful person you are, to think of others, before yourself, when you have such an abundance of talent yourself. I have only been on this site for a couple of weeks, but your posts were the first I discovered, with the charming Scottish brogue. I am so fortunate to have found this site and am thankful for the many new friends I have found here, yourself being at the topa' the list. Thank you for this poem. I loved it. I've already given you too many stars I guess. You only get a five this time Auld Yin. :-)
Nita
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
Comment from rchitwood
As always I love your writings and I could listen to your words all day long.Your Lass has gone looking for fame for could not forget her family at home.Your poem is very well written and creative.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
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As always I love your writings and I could listen to your words all day long.Your Lass has gone looking for fame for could not forget her family at home.Your poem is very well written and creative.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
Comment from mmmichelle34
I love this you writing and having it were you can hear it as well and who better to recite the poem is the author this is the second one of yours I got the pleasure of hearing and this one I played twice it is beautiful.
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I love this you writing and having it were you can hear it as well and who better to recite the poem is the author this is the second one of yours I got the pleasure of hearing and this one I played twice it is beautiful.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
