For the Birds
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Bigfoot and the Canary"Poems about those winged gifts from above.
15 total reviews
Comment from elliejean
I like this poem. Big foot and the canary. We could probably meet big foot is we were as nice as the canary. Ancient meets modern times. In love it. Great work.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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I like this poem. Big foot and the canary. We could probably meet big foot is we were as nice as the canary. Ancient meets modern times. In love it. Great work.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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Thanks for reading and enjoying this unusual tale. Elaine
Comment from FlamingSpade
You may have had a rough day at work, but you are a songbird with your lovely words. I could see and hear the songbird and the primate. Rough days become you. Ginger
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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You may have had a rough day at work, but you are a songbird with your lovely words. I could see and hear the songbird and the primate. Rough days become you. Ginger
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Your words inspire me! Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Allison78
What a lovely poem you have written!
Very sweet and creative to think of
Putting Bigfoot and a canary together!
Great jib on this!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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What a lovely poem you have written!
Very sweet and creative to think of
Putting Bigfoot and a canary together!
Great jib on this!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for reading and enjoying another day in the big ape's life. Elaine
Comment from Maxxx
i love this poem! what a imaginative delightful picture...a canary singing to the shy ape, and the hypnotic effect on the beast, like he's come to feel belonging, experience beauty...human-like in his demeanor.
love this: "and his eyes soften his face less hard his soul quiet"
beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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i love this poem! what a imaginative delightful picture...a canary singing to the shy ape, and the hypnotic effect on the beast, like he's come to feel belonging, experience beauty...human-like in his demeanor.
love this: "and his eyes soften his face less hard his soul quiet"
beautiful poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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You made my day with this review! Thanks for reading and I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from c_lucas
It is wise to remain hidden from a stronger foe. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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It is wise to remain hidden from a stronger foe. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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I appreciate your taking time to read about this unusual pair. Elaine
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You're welcome, Elaine. Charlie
Comment from Kingsland
Big foot is real to those with imaginary zeal. This was a well written and conceived piece of poetic art. It was just a joy to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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Big foot is real to those with imaginary zeal. This was a well written and conceived piece of poetic art. It was just a joy to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 19-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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I appreciate your taking time to read about the big ape. Elaine
Comment from mumsyone
I hope, if there is a Bigfoot around here, that it finds a canary to soothe its nature! Cute idea and a cute poem. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2011
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I hope, if there is a Bigfoot around here, that it finds a canary to soothe its nature! Cute idea and a cute poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2011
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Thanks for reading and enjoying the Bigfoot encounter. Elaine
Comment from geetika sethi
well a day starts with a roar and is suppose to end with softness...same way the bigfoot and the melody of the canary express whims. it sure expresses your ideas in perfect flow and meter. your rhyme is great and so are the chosen words.
thanks for sharing your views
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2011
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well a day starts with a roar and is suppose to end with softness...same way the bigfoot and the melody of the canary express whims. it sure expresses your ideas in perfect flow and meter. your rhyme is great and so are the chosen words.
thanks for sharing your views
Comment Written 07-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2011
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from adewpearl
what a fanciful scene to imagine - the meeting of a songbird with a bigfoot
Lovely use of alliteration
I really like the characterization of this legendary being as a sensitive, gentle giant :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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what a fanciful scene to imagine - the meeting of a songbird with a bigfoot
Lovely use of alliteration
I really like the characterization of this legendary being as a sensitive, gentle giant :-) Brooke
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2011
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine
Comment from tx
HI this is a lovely poem of big and small amd how one can be in tune with the other a match you would not expect it paints a sweet picture well done cheers tx
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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HI this is a lovely poem of big and small amd how one can be in tune with the other a match you would not expect it paints a sweet picture well done cheers tx
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2011
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
