Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Part 2, Chapter 12"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Chris Tee
Wow Barbara! This is a new twist in the tale we have here old sport here. I love your story and cannot wait for your next post.
Well done with another splendid part here ma'am.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Wow Barbara! This is a new twist in the tale we have here old sport here. I love your story and cannot wait for your next post.
Well done with another splendid part here ma'am.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Yvette Wilson
Since she asked him how he was really doing I don't think you need to say by the way or do you mean for it to be in the next sentence with the comment about staying away from alcohol?
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Since she asked him how he was really doing I don't think you need to say by the way or do you mean for it to be in the next sentence with the comment about staying away from alcohol?
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from purrfect tale
I didn't know all this information about Hepatitis B. How scary. The story covered it all well without getting bogged now in medical jargon. No SPAGs.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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I didn't know all this information about Hepatitis B. How scary. The story covered it all well without getting bogged now in medical jargon. No SPAGs.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
So we now know Troy's dark secret. I remember reading that he had one in one of the earliest chapters. Now, Troy admits that he's lost a shot at West Point and several girlfriends. So we'll see...
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize. I'd give you six stars, but Fanstory won't let me.
Dave
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Barbara,
So we now know Troy's dark secret. I remember reading that he had one in one of the earliest chapters. Now, Troy admits that he's lost a shot at West Point and several girlfriends. So we'll see...
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize. I'd give you six stars, but Fanstory won't let me.
Dave
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the virtual six.
Comment from Charlie Crewes
I've read several of your chapters, picking it up a little late, but finding each work interesting with good dialogue and character descriptions. Found your final line interesting and gets you prepared for the next segment. Well-done and a good read.
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I've read several of your chapters, picking it up a little late, but finding each work interesting with good dialogue and character descriptions. Found your final line interesting and gets you prepared for the next segment. Well-done and a good read.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rama Rao
Another excellent chapter which was well scripted. You have introduced a new twist in the story.
Now, Hepatitis-B will introduce new changes in the relationship between Anna and Troy.
Waiting to read the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Another excellent chapter which was well scripted. You have introduced a new twist in the story.
Now, Hepatitis-B will introduce new changes in the relationship between Anna and Troy.
Waiting to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from oNray
Enjoyable read. Nice base with very good story line. Moves along nicely not jumping or dragging feet. Your ability to talk to reader and involve them. Presents well .
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Enjoyable read. Nice base with very good story line. Moves along nicely not jumping or dragging feet. Your ability to talk to reader and involve them. Presents well .
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Teresa Paul
I love your story! I read your chapter before this one and was aware of what was going on in this chapter. I think you read my poem, that is why I am trying to keep up with your work. Very well written easy to follow, very interesting plot. I am a domestic abuse survivor. That is probably why I find your story so intriguing! Congratulations on a Job Well Done. I liked your authors notes, directing victims to Hotlist numbers. Blessings to you and yours, Teresa.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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I love your story! I read your chapter before this one and was aware of what was going on in this chapter. I think you read my poem, that is why I am trying to keep up with your work. Very well written easy to follow, very interesting plot. I am a domestic abuse survivor. That is probably why I find your story so intriguing! Congratulations on a Job Well Done. I liked your authors notes, directing victims to Hotlist numbers. Blessings to you and yours, Teresa.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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The pleasure is all mine!
Comment from rosine (roneth)
Very good work as usual!
This chapter seems a little shorter than the others.
Very good dialogue!
You built the tension like a pro.
You cut the previous chapter at the right place and I was holding my breath for this.
You are a very talented writer
Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Very good work as usual!
This chapter seems a little shorter than the others.
Very good dialogue!
You built the tension like a pro.
You cut the previous chapter at the right place and I was holding my breath for this.
You are a very talented writer
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome!
Comment from Misrael
Very good story and keeps the attention real well. I just wish that you had not stoped at that point. But it does make a person want to come back for more. Good story and good job.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Very good story and keeps the attention real well. I just wish that you had not stoped at that point. But it does make a person want to come back for more. Good story and good job.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. My next post will be the end of chapter 12. I am afriad my posts would be too long if I did complete chapters.
