Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Writingfundimension
Terrific chapter, here. You've skillfully written a very belivable follow-up to the stunning news of the last chapter. And we have been given a glimpse into, perhaps, the source of Troy's empathy for Anna. Kind regards, Bev
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Terrific chapter, here. You've skillfully written a very belivable follow-up to the stunning news of the last chapter. And we have been given a glimpse into, perhaps, the source of Troy's empathy for Anna. Kind regards, Bev
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Comment from Cheryl Daphine
A great chapter. I hope that mother-in-law really mess' up and gets arrested or something. This poor girl deserves a break. She needs some space to grow a backbone. The baby should bring that out in her. Good story,Barbara.
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A great chapter. I hope that mother-in-law really mess' up and gets arrested or something. This poor girl deserves a break. She needs some space to grow a backbone. The baby should bring that out in her. Good story,Barbara.
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Comment from Tonulak
The scene with Troy and Anna was very tender and very natural, excellentshifts of emotion and understanding. Good detail on the hepatitis and how it's contracted. A very good job.
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The scene with Troy and Anna was very tender and very natural, excellentshifts of emotion and understanding. Good detail on the hepatitis and how it's contracted. A very good job.
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Comment from amada
A great twist in the court drama and the new development on Troy's situation. Great job in inform us about that sickness. Wondering what other things Troy might be withholding.
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A great twist in the court drama and the new development on Troy's situation. Great job in inform us about that sickness. Wondering what other things Troy might be withholding.
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Comment from bookishfabler
oh and you weave yet another of life's trdgedy's into you story. sorry I haven't bee around much. I will try to keep up here. Great chapter.
on to the next.
hugs book
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oh and you weave yet another of life's trdgedy's into you story. sorry I haven't bee around much. I will try to keep up here. Great chapter.
on to the next.
hugs book
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Comment from MS Writer
Another interesting development in this story. Good story, characters, and dialogue. Your postings are always well written and informative. Great read.
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Another interesting development in this story. Good story, characters, and dialogue. Your postings are always well written and informative. Great read.
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
You've done a good job with this, Barbara. Ignorance is a real problem with most chronic communicable diseases. Most aren't all that easy to catch if you use a little caution. Believable reactions by all your characters. :) Nancy
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You've done a good job with this, Barbara. Ignorance is a real problem with most chronic communicable diseases. Most aren't all that easy to catch if you use a little caution. Believable reactions by all your characters. :) Nancy
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Comment from kiwisteveh
You have done a good job of conveying the Hep B information in layman's terms and still keeping the dialogue reasonably natural.
I guess part of me is wondering whether the high-minded man that Troy seems to be would have waited so long to tell Anna the truth...
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You have done a good job of conveying the Hep B information in layman's terms and still keeping the dialogue reasonably natural.
I guess part of me is wondering whether the high-minded man that Troy seems to be would have waited so long to tell Anna the truth...
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where troy and anna discuss his chronic hepatitis b and he asks if there's any future for them
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this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where troy and anna discuss his chronic hepatitis b and he asks if there's any future for them
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Comment from robina1978
Anna got another big shock-two even. Bad thing happening in the court case and the scare that Troy could have infected her little boy and kept a secret from her. Fortunately Troy finds her quickly and can explain, I think she will accept his explanation.
Bigger question how will it progress in court after this after the recess.
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Anna got another big shock-two even. Bad thing happening in the court case and the scare that Troy could have infected her little boy and kept a secret from her. Fortunately Troy finds her quickly and can explain, I think she will accept his explanation.
Bigger question how will it progress in court after this after the recess.
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