Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Part 2, Chapter 12"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)Very well done. When the allegation against Troy came up I was caught off guard. As a physiologist I do know about Chronic hepatitis B, but it would be quite difficult for Mrs.Rodgers or her lawyer to get medical records reflecting this infection. Other STDs would be easier to out, because they are more easily found in public health records.
Once Paul is able to show the facts abiout Troy's infection, he should have no problem convincing the judge that any contact with Michael will pose no safety problem.
I think the weight of evidence from the divorce trial will prove that Bobby will pose great danger to both Anna and Michael. Mr. Brown seems to be a young and inept lawyer operating on the idea that if someone throws enough mud on the wall some of it will stick.
I'm ready to end this frivious custody suit.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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Hi Barbara:)Very well done. When the allegation against Troy came up I was caught off guard. As a physiologist I do know about Chronic hepatitis B, but it would be quite difficult for Mrs.Rodgers or her lawyer to get medical records reflecting this infection. Other STDs would be easier to out, because they are more easily found in public health records.
Once Paul is able to show the facts abiout Troy's infection, he should have no problem convincing the judge that any contact with Michael will pose no safety problem.
I think the weight of evidence from the divorce trial will prove that Bobby will pose great danger to both Anna and Michael. Mr. Brown seems to be a young and inept lawyer operating on the idea that if someone throws enough mud on the wall some of it will stick.
I'm ready to end this frivious custody suit.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from gypsynet
a good follow-up for the preceeding chapter with a right amount of tension to carry the plot through details that further enhance the mood and development of the story... dialogue allows clearer picture of the inner workings of the character...
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a good follow-up for the preceeding chapter with a right amount of tension to carry the plot through details that further enhance the mood and development of the story... dialogue allows clearer picture of the inner workings of the character...
Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rchitwood
I hope not but I really think it will come out pretty good for Anna and Troy. I still want to see the other Grandmother lose in court your story again has good dialogue and draws the reader in.I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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I hope not but I really think it will come out pretty good for Anna and Troy. I still want to see the other Grandmother lose in court your story again has good dialogue and draws the reader in.I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mmmichelle34
I am pretty sure that I have gotten to read this once before because I had made a comment about how good it was for you to put the information about hep A B and C but they let me rate you again and well as always you're an excellent writer good work.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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I am pretty sure that I have gotten to read this once before because I had made a comment about how good it was for you to put the information about hep A B and C but they let me rate you again and well as always you're an excellent writer good work.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
An excellent continuation of the story. It feels right and fits your characters. Because they like each other, there was willingness to listen and I feel Troy's part of the conversation were ideal.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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An excellent continuation of the story. It feels right and fits your characters. Because they like each other, there was willingness to listen and I feel Troy's part of the conversation were ideal.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
If they don't have enough problems. It is a good hook and you are very good at using them. I will read on to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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If they don't have enough problems. It is a good hook and you are very good at using them. I will read on to the next chapter.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JW
This chapter is not only interesting, but it is also education. Thanks for your sharing this, I have learned something new today.
Thank you. JW
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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This chapter is not only interesting, but it is also education. Thanks for your sharing this, I have learned something new today.
Thank you. JW
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
I'm a litle confused or maybe I just missed something. I thought Troy was Paul Sorenson's son. How could he have gotten Hep B from a stepfather. Otherwise, another great chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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I'm a litle confused or maybe I just missed something. I thought Troy was Paul Sorenson's son. How could he have gotten Hep B from a stepfather. Otherwise, another great chapter.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. Troy was adopted after he witnessed his stepfather murdering his mother. His real father died in a car crash. In a beginning chapter.
Comment from peggles
What an interesting development in this story
Your characters seem to come to life on the page and their dialogue is true to the personalities you are developing
I am enjoying this very much
Looking forward to more of this
Well done
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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What an interesting development in this story
Your characters seem to come to life on the page and their dialogue is true to the personalities you are developing
I am enjoying this very much
Looking forward to more of this
Well done
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from alexisleech
This is a beautifully written, compelling chapter. I suppose it's hard to imagine how you would cope with news like this, if you've never had to but it was the same with Aids, it was only ignorance that caused people to act in the way that they did. This chapter was not only a very enjoyable read, it was very informative too
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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This is a beautifully written, compelling chapter. I suppose it's hard to imagine how you would cope with news like this, if you've never had to but it was the same with Aids, it was only ignorance that caused people to act in the way that they did. This chapter was not only a very enjoyable read, it was very informative too
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
