For the Birds
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Chickadee Heaven"Poems about those winged gifts from above.
15 total reviews
Comment from Modee
Very cool little post here...and the picture is adorable. There is a restaurant we go to that has bird feeders out on the porch. Lots of fun to have lunch and watch the birds play.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Very cool little post here...and the picture is adorable. There is a restaurant we go to that has bird feeders out on the porch. Lots of fun to have lunch and watch the birds play.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Chickadees are common where I live and I enjoy watching them. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Anisa-
This is a very nice poem. It flows well, and reads easy. I enjoyed it. The picture you chose is very nice too. Thanks for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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This is a very nice poem. It flows well, and reads easy. I enjoyed it. The picture you chose is very nice too. Thanks for sharing! :)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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I appreciate your positive comments and great review. Elaine
Comment from ~ My Dear Heart ~
I just love your poem about the chickadees, one of my favorite little birds also, I had one land on my hand once, and stay there for a moment, which you must know is amazing as they are always moving. I never forget that.. the picture chosen really enhances your words.. Constance
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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I just love your poem about the chickadees, one of my favorite little birds also, I had one land on my hand once, and stay there for a moment, which you must know is amazing as they are always moving. I never forget that.. the picture chosen really enhances your words.. Constance
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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That must have been an awesome sight, a chickadee on your hand. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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You are very welcome Elaine
Comment from midlifeiowan
This is a very nice poem! It describes a great deal about the little birds, their eating and grooming habits, as-well-as how pretty they are. It also nicely describes your love for them and how you care for them! My only other comment would be that it might read a bit more easily if you added periods after "what natural beauty is", "with peanutbutter", and "in chickadee heaven". The first time I read it, I found myself back-tracking to fit the next line in context. Adding the punctuation would prevent that. In any case, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem! Thank you for sharing!! -Jean.
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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This is a very nice poem! It describes a great deal about the little birds, their eating and grooming habits, as-well-as how pretty they are. It also nicely describes your love for them and how you care for them! My only other comment would be that it might read a bit more easily if you added periods after "what natural beauty is", "with peanutbutter", and "in chickadee heaven". The first time I read it, I found myself back-tracking to fit the next line in context. Adding the punctuation would prevent that. In any case, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem! Thank you for sharing!! -Jean.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the suggestions and I appreciate your positive comments about these delightful birds. Elaine
Comment from Gungalo
This poem shows a tremendous love for the Chicadee and care that is beyond feeding. It is wonderful and so very important. Take good care of them girl!!
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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This poem shows a tremendous love for the Chicadee and care that is beyond feeding. It is wonderful and so very important. Take good care of them girl!!
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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I appreciate your taking time to read about these delightful little birds. Elaine
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