Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Part three, Chapter 11"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
This is an exceptional, flawless chapter that shows well how worried Anna is for her baby. Sounds like the Rodgers have used an entrapment strategy.
I enjoyed this read and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Barbara,
This is an exceptional, flawless chapter that shows well how worried Anna is for her baby. Sounds like the Rodgers have used an entrapment strategy.
I enjoyed this read and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for you kind review a nd support.
Comment from gramalot8
Your story is wonderful as usual. I love the statistics at the end. It shows you've really reserached and done your homework in order to write on this subject. Good job as always.
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Your story is wonderful as usual. I love the statistics at the end. It shows you've really reserached and done your homework in order to write on this subject. Good job as always.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JW
This is another good chapter and it will make an excellent addition to your story. I definitely learned something new in reading it. I never would have thought of someone using this type of tactic. JW
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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This is another good chapter and it will make an excellent addition to your story. I definitely learned something new in reading it. I never would have thought of someone using this type of tactic. JW
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
Another turn of events in Anna's ever growing saga. I enjoyed the reading of this chapter and wanted more. I hope you are having a nice day in central Texas as we are in North Texas. I loved the rain and cooler weather. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Another turn of events in Anna's ever growing saga. I enjoyed the reading of this chapter and wanted more. I hope you are having a nice day in central Texas as we are in North Texas. I loved the rain and cooler weather. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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We are getting no rain, but it's only in the 80's. Tomorrow it is to be up in the 90's again and then cool off the rest of the week to the 70's.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara. Anna is a brave woman, you have described her well. So the abduction is only a proof that she is not capable? Bobby's side is so imaginative in this matter... Interesting as always, Barbara, especially the way you write in dialogues.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Hi, Barbara. Anna is a brave woman, you have described her well. So the abduction is only a proof that she is not capable? Bobby's side is so imaginative in this matter... Interesting as always, Barbara, especially the way you write in dialogues.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MS Writer
I was looking forward to the continuing story. You have left us in suspense as to what is going to happen next. I always find your notes informative and iteresting and adds to the story because we are so much more informed. Great posting.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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I was looking forward to the continuing story. You have left us in suspense as to what is going to happen next. I always find your notes informative and iteresting and adds to the story because we are so much more informed. Great posting.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mariea
Good morning Barbara. Another smoothly flowing chapter without any clutter. The story is developing well as it progresses. Characters and dialogue realistic and no editing necessary that I could see.
Hugs Mia
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Good morning Barbara. Another smoothly flowing chapter without any clutter. The story is developing well as it progresses. Characters and dialogue realistic and no editing necessary that I could see.
Hugs Mia
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
This certainly kept my attention. I don't see how anyone could agree with her mother and father-in-law. I can't understand. If she was given full custody, how could they dispute this? I would think they would get in trouble for attempted kidnapping. Good writing, Barbara.
April
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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This certainly kept my attention. I don't see how anyone could agree with her mother and father-in-law. I can't understand. If she was given full custody, how could they dispute this? I would think they would get in trouble for attempted kidnapping. Good writing, Barbara.
April
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Gungalo
She is shaky as the drama begins but her attorney seems not to be. Is he over confidant? Only time will tell us what's going on. Very good girl!!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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She is shaky as the drama begins but her attorney seems not to be. Is he over confidant? Only time will tell us what's going on. Very good girl!!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janie King
Oh, now I have to wait until next week to see what happens. Oh Well, that will give Everett time to find out the info he needs. Good job..sad because it happens to too many people. God bless.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Oh, now I have to wait until next week to see what happens. Oh Well, that will give Everett time to find out the info he needs. Good job..sad because it happens to too many people. God bless.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
