Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Part three, Chapter 11"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from bookishfabler
Hello, my dear. So sorry I've been missing. some personal things needed to be taken care of. Today I needed to see what has been going on here. I miss you and FS. Apparently I missed a lot. I will have to go back and have a peek. Not nits, great chapter,t hough short.
hugs book
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Hello, my dear. So sorry I've been missing. some personal things needed to be taken care of. Today I needed to see what has been going on here. I miss you and FS. Apparently I missed a lot. I will have to go back and have a peek. Not nits, great chapter,t hough short.
hugs book
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Another good chapter, Barbara. Anxious to see what happens next. The way things go in the world today, it seems that "the bad guy" always wins.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Another good chapter, Barbara. Anxious to see what happens next. The way things go in the world today, it seems that "the bad guy" always wins.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
Uh-Oh ... I don't like that idea at all, calling Everett to the stand. I hope the new lawyer doesn't trick him into hurting the case. I am anxious to see how this plays out. Another great chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Uh-Oh ... I don't like that idea at all, calling Everett to the stand. I hope the new lawyer doesn't trick him into hurting the case. I am anxious to see how this plays out. Another great chapter.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Great chapter, and an excellent place to end this. It keeps the suspense at a high level. Anna or any mom would feel tortured by all this upheaval in their lives.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Great chapter, and an excellent place to end this. It keeps the suspense at a high level. Anna or any mom would feel tortured by all this upheaval in their lives.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rchitwood
You left me up in the hour I wanted to see what happened in court.As always I love your stories.It reminds me of my own life in abuse with my Dad.Very good dialogue and characters.Very creative and believable and well writtened.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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You left me up in the hour I wanted to see what happened in court.As always I love your stories.It reminds me of my own life in abuse with my Dad.Very good dialogue and characters.Very creative and believable and well writtened.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 18-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and your insight.
Comment from eliz100
This is well written from beginning to end, as usual. The question is, when will Anna have some peace in her life? Probably at the end of the book.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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This is well written from beginning to end, as usual. The question is, when will Anna have some peace in her life? Probably at the end of the book.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amada
Great chapter and a great suspension pause as well. The progression of the story is steady and very similar to real events. Can't wait for the next one.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Great chapter and a great suspension pause as well. The progression of the story is steady and very similar to real events. Can't wait for the next one.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Another nail biting chapter, with a brilliant cliff hanger...Everett been called and treated as a hostile witness.
Poor Anna, thrown again into the constant state of trauma of having the Rogers constantly snapping at her heels and her happiness.
Another good post.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Another nail biting chapter, with a brilliant cliff hanger...Everett been called and treated as a hostile witness.
Poor Anna, thrown again into the constant state of trauma of having the Rogers constantly snapping at her heels and her happiness.
Another good post.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Yvette Wilson
You did a good job in showing her anguish. The descriptions of her rubbing her stomach and wiping the tear off of her cheek helps paint the image of her pain.
Nice job thanks1
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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You did a good job in showing her anguish. The descriptions of her rubbing her stomach and wiping the tear off of her cheek helps paint the image of her pain.
Nice job thanks1
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
It is a good idea to end where you did. I am so eager to fine what is going to happen I can hardly wait. The chapter is basic information so ending it this way really works.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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It is a good idea to end where you did. I am so eager to fine what is going to happen I can hardly wait. The chapter is basic information so ending it this way really works.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
