Comment from moyramouse

Excellent

What fun, Steve! Seem to remember this is how I met you!!!!!!
Just dropping by to see what you've been up to.
The judge's wife heard he'd been straying
with a cutie her man had been laying
she slashed a stiletto
now he sings falsetto
but the cutie's still out there sashaying.
Couldn't resist it!! Hope all is well with you. xxmouse

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011

Busy, busy, busy! You must be a little less so since you've had time to peek into my portfolio!
Tonight we have our school Fashion, Food, Arts and Cultural Festival. In a moment of sheer madness I volunteered to write 'Poems While You Wait'!! Will let you know how that goes...
In the meantime I am slowly constructing an epic for the Story in a Poem comp. Gome past 100 lines already....

Comment from elliejean

Excellent

There is all kinds of ways to win a contest. This is cute. I like the way you used dark blue for the black and white picture. Your poem stood out. Good work.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thank you for the kind words.
Steve

Comment from Betty517

Excellent

Which he was, which is why she won booty.

Great line! This was a very good limerick and funny too! I want to wish you well in the contest.

Betty

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011

Thanks, Betty - glad you enjoyed my limerick.

Comment from purrfect tale

Excellent

You definitely got the humor down, I'm still chuckling. He should be de-judged. You got the limerick cadence and rhyming scheme.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thank you for the kind words.
Steve

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

Not a very fair contest I really enjoyed reading your poem.It was quite amusing and it has good smooth line flow.Your photo compliments it well.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thank you for the kind words.
Steve

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

this is great. roflmao made me smile and giggle and smile and giggle some more. imagery is excellent. wow~ lots of good ones here. good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thank you for the kind words.
Steve

reply by babylonia on 23-Oct-2011

steve,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Hi, Author, I think I know who you are. Your title and author notes reveal yourself, though the title is not fitting to the contents. Anyway, who cares, this is limerick madness anyway, right?

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thank you for the kind words.
Steve

Did you guess right? Actually I made a mistake and entered this one when I had a better one (I think) written.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this limerick about the contestant who got a booty call, made me smile, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thank you for the kind words.
Steve

Comment from Cheryl Baker

Excellent

This is a very funny limerick. Well written and highly amusing. It had me laughing out loud. What great artwork! Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011

Thank you for the kind words.
Steve

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Excellent. Very funny and well illustrated, too. The play on words is great and the rhyme and rhythm are in perfect Limerick style.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011

Thanks for your kind words.
Steve