Centered.
Where delight transpires.9 total reviews
Comment from daniela.albu
You make well use of the few six words by creating a powerful state of mind and a vivid image of our life that lies in that each day between sunrise and sunset. You also have here a lovely internal rhyme combined with aliteration and the most poetic word of all - "Sandwitched"
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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You make well use of the few six words by creating a powerful state of mind and a vivid image of our life that lies in that each day between sunrise and sunset. You also have here a lovely internal rhyme combined with aliteration and the most poetic word of all - "Sandwitched"
Comment Written 25-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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Thank you
Comment from sailaway7289
Love the picture! Great job on the six word poetry contest - I don't think I could have done it. Makes me think that each day of our life is sandwiched between sunrise to sunrise. I'm trying to think about each day being a box that is opened when I wake for the day. I put the day in as it goes along and then secure the box shut as the day winds down. If each day is it's own box, then I don't want to waste the box by not doing anything with the day. Who wants to secure an empty box? I know I'm rambling here - my sister's death has caused a lot of strange thoughts to enter my head.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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Love the picture! Great job on the six word poetry contest - I don't think I could have done it. Makes me think that each day of our life is sandwiched between sunrise to sunrise. I'm trying to think about each day being a box that is opened when I wake for the day. I put the day in as it goes along and then secure the box shut as the day winds down. If each day is it's own box, then I don't want to waste the box by not doing anything with the day. Who wants to secure an empty box? I know I'm rambling here - my sister's death has caused a lot of strange thoughts to enter my head.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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So sorry for your loss. The name of the art work that was suggested is Afternoon Delight..thus between sunrise and suset.
Thanks for the review.
Comment from Joan E.
What a vivid image you have created and evocative mood! The picture and presentation you chose are quite synergistic. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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What a vivid image you have created and evocative mood! The picture and presentation you chose are quite synergistic. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Melspoems
Perfect poetic description of afternoon delight, in just six words.
Great choice of words using imagery and alliteration.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
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Perfect poetic description of afternoon delight, in just six words.
Great choice of words using imagery and alliteration.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from BigTomNY
Thats really really really hard to do and you smashed it into eternity as it is perfect! I do not see how this doesnt win thw conteste!!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thats really really really hard to do and you smashed it into eternity as it is perfect! I do not see how this doesnt win thw conteste!!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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thanks loads for the great review.
Comment from allborn66
This is a cute idea. I'm not really sure if I like it. I think it needs a few more words to express your intended message.
Barbara
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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This is a cute idea. I'm not really sure if I like it. I think it needs a few more words to express your intended message.
Barbara
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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contest restricted me to six words. thanks for reading.
Comment from bowls
My goodness - I don't know how you managed to get a message across in six little words! I like the image - morning on one side, evening on the other, and the filling is the day with all its delights. Even sunrise and sunset conjure up beautiful pictures of colourful skies and peaceful scenes. Good job!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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My goodness - I don't know how you managed to get a message across in six little words! I like the image - morning on one side, evening on the other, and the filling is the day with all its delights. Even sunrise and sunset conjure up beautiful pictures of colourful skies and peaceful scenes. Good job!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the review
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem has good description and it kind of reminds one of being closed in.Very creative and good effective images.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Your poem has good description and it kind of reminds one of being closed in.Very creative and good effective images.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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thanks for reading.
Comment from OklahomaDreamer
I would love to be sandwiched between sunrise and sunset if my surrounding were that beautiful!
Talk about never wanting your day to end...
In Alaska there is a lot of "between sunrise and sunset".
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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I would love to be sandwiched between sunrise and sunset if my surrounding were that beautiful!
Talk about never wanting your day to end...
In Alaska there is a lot of "between sunrise and sunset".
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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thanks for reading. I couldn't take Alaska.
