Prehistoric Souls
A different Halloween poem44 total reviews
Comment from waihekebach
Original and childlike.....please note not childish.
You know your prehistoric critters well.
This is a fun write and the poetry is very good.
I would hate to ever see a real one.
Great effort.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Original and childlike.....please note not childish.
You know your prehistoric critters well.
This is a fun write and the poetry is very good.
I would hate to ever see a real one.
Great effort.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading about these dinosaurs. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from rivki1111
Hello, this is very original and I like the way you superimpose the dinosaurs into our modern life with cars and streets and mailmen...nicely done!!
No ideas for improvement, and thanks for sharing your writing, cheers, Rebekah.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Hello, this is very original and I like the way you superimpose the dinosaurs into our modern life with cars and streets and mailmen...nicely done!!
No ideas for improvement, and thanks for sharing your writing, cheers, Rebekah.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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I am honored by your review. Thanks. Elaine
Comment from poetstar
I have always been fascinated with all types of dinosaurs. What an exciting idea to think they have their ghosts roaming here on Halloween. Not to be critical, but the print was just a little hard to read on the dark green background. I could read it, but someone with vision problems might not be able to see it well. It could just be the way my computer is though, it may show things darker. The wording and subject matter is great. The picture is wonderful with the wording. All and all this is such an excellent job.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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I have always been fascinated with all types of dinosaurs. What an exciting idea to think they have their ghosts roaming here on Halloween. Not to be critical, but the print was just a little hard to read on the dark green background. I could read it, but someone with vision problems might not be able to see it well. It could just be the way my computer is though, it may show things darker. The wording and subject matter is great. The picture is wonderful with the wording. All and all this is such an excellent job.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks for your suggestion about the print on the dark green background. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
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You are always welcome.
Comment from nancyjam
Very imaginative - I love the imagery
and your unique perspective - seeing
and hearing these ancient creatures
on your street!
terrific! I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Very imaginative - I love the imagery
and your unique perspective - seeing
and hearing these ancient creatures
on your street!
terrific! I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Thanks! Elaine
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi mermaids,
Your vivid imagination serves you well. I love this poem...a little different, yes, but it is a fine write. Your word choices are expressive and I love the theme...well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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Hi mermaids,
Your vivid imagination serves you well. I love this poem...a little different, yes, but it is a fine write. Your word choices are expressive and I love the theme...well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2011
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I appreciate your great review! Thanks. Elaine
Comment from MelissaBickel
Well your poem does well in grabbing hold of the imagination! I was like I want to see dinosaurs too!! Yikes I chills thinking about raptors stalking the mailman, those vicious little buggars.
Great imagery here and a nice free verse to boot! I luv'er it!! Bravo
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Well your poem does well in grabbing hold of the imagination! I was like I want to see dinosaurs too!! Yikes I chills thinking about raptors stalking the mailman, those vicious little buggars.
Great imagery here and a nice free verse to boot! I luv'er it!! Bravo
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading and enjoying this unusual Halloween poem. I appreciate your comments. Elaine
Comment from justjo66
Sometimes I "see" them, too. Mostly at construction
sites in the big equipment etc. :o) I enjoyed your
different kind of poem. Very amusing and
creative.
Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Sometimes I "see" them, too. Mostly at construction
sites in the big equipment etc. :o) I enjoyed your
different kind of poem. Very amusing and
creative.
Good job.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading and enjoying this unusual poem. Elaine
Comment from Luvs2rite4u
This was awesome and very original piece of work. I, as the reader, was amazed by feeling the pounding of feet, and hearing screeches made by the reptiles as they swooshed by my head. I felt as If I was on the street that night. What a work of art. I enjoyed reading and feeling as though I was right there! Great Job.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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This was awesome and very original piece of work. I, as the reader, was amazed by feeling the pounding of feet, and hearing screeches made by the reptiles as they swooshed by my head. I felt as If I was on the street that night. What a work of art. I enjoyed reading and feeling as though I was right there! Great Job.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Thanks again for the six stars. I love dinosaurs and this poem just came into my head. Elaine
Comment from Alexander E Poet
wish I had a six ,this was great ,never put dinosaurs and halloween, heck I never wrote the word dinosaurs it. Nice form I thought this was . Very well written pieceI love the story this poem tell and the inward thinking, This is such a wonderful peice.keep writing. There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ
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wish I had a six ,this was great ,never put dinosaurs and halloween, heck I never wrote the word dinosaurs it. Nice form I thought this was . Very well written pieceI love the story this poem tell and the inward thinking, This is such a wonderful peice.keep writing. There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Glad you enjoyed this unusual poem. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Kingsland
Dinosaurs capture our imagination in so many varied ways. This was an excellent piece of poetic artistry on this very dynamic creatures that capture our imaginations. This was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Dinosaurs capture our imagination in so many varied ways. This was an excellent piece of poetic artistry on this very dynamic creatures that capture our imaginations. This was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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I am honored by your review. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine
