Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I saw no flaws with your writing. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine

reply by c_lucas on 16-Oct-2011

You're welcome, Ine.

Comment from wiljacro

Exceptional

HI! robina. what a lovely children's story you are writing, it is just the sort of tale that will be suitable for Mum's or Grandma's to read at bed time and I'm sure that all children will love it and will plead to hear just one more chapter before having to go to sleep. Well done and well written! wiljacro.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine.
Thanks so much for this outrageous rating. Glad you liked it as a kid's story.

Comment from ephraim crud, COS.

Excellent

i still think it should've been
called Tyburn! lol.

muchly enjoyed this latest adventure
of Mareng's. as always, penned delightfully.
thank you, Dutchess Ine, for sharing.
warmly, xx, eph.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine. That is a male name and she is a she my Prince.

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

How lovely, Ine. You have included your new dog in this chapter! It works perfectly, too, making her Mareng's birthday gift. This is a sweet chapter. Well don.

You will here more about college in the next chapter. - You will hear more about...

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine.
Thanks for spotting this typo.