Lint
Yeah, Everyone Gets It ...52 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
This is quite amusing and catches the annoyance of the little fluffy critter that litters our clothes from suits to socks and then attacks our belly! Great rhyme and clever phrasing.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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This is quite amusing and catches the annoyance of the little fluffy critter that litters our clothes from suits to socks and then attacks our belly! Great rhyme and clever phrasing.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks Spitfire, I appreciate the support on this wacky write.
Cheers closet xo
Comment from strandregs
This is one of your best creations alarmingly enough
it is about fluff.
The picture is absolutely disgusting ,I'll have to bang my head against the wall for a while before I go for supper.
my favorite !!!
On a friend, I recommend
Remove it if you see it
Show you care, reach over there
Just pull it off and free it .
Zelick
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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This is one of your best creations alarmingly enough
it is about fluff.
The picture is absolutely disgusting ,I'll have to bang my head against the wall for a while before I go for supper.
my favorite !!!
On a friend, I recommend
Remove it if you see it
Show you care, reach over there
Just pull it off and free it .
Zelick
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much. I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Closet xo
Comment from Betty517
Luckily I am an outey so no lint! I just felt like I gave you too much information! LOL! This is a very fun and entertaining read.
Betty
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Luckily I am an outey so no lint! I just felt like I gave you too much information! LOL! This is a very fun and entertaining read.
Betty
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Haha... an outey! Funny you should say that...I have written an "inney" and "outey" poem...Always wondered what an outey was like...lint free obviously. Thanks for an enlightening review. Guess this poem doesn't apply to the "outey's" huh? Bahaha
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Comment from judy corcoran
lol - i love it
and i agree - one can really write about anything
- a lot of people say they have enjoyed my 'dunny' poems :)
such excellent rhyme and rhythm (lol as per your usual)
- especially the inventive rhymes...
and i really like
'Sweaty skin, will chaeuffer in
Each crevice, open slather'
lol - is that your husband's belly?
love judy
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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lol - i love it
and i agree - one can really write about anything
- a lot of people say they have enjoyed my 'dunny' poems :)
such excellent rhyme and rhythm (lol as per your usual)
- especially the inventive rhymes...
and i really like
'Sweaty skin, will chaeuffer in
Each crevice, open slather'
lol - is that your husband's belly?
love judy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much judy. I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Closet
Comment from Eleanor Buron
If one has never thought about lint in a variety of ways, this poem opends the door for doing just that.. The flow is great and the imagery vivid and comical. I enjoyed the poem. It's executed well with a skippy-happy rhythm. I wouldn't chaange a word.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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If one has never thought about lint in a variety of ways, this poem opends the door for doing just that.. The flow is great and the imagery vivid and comical. I enjoyed the poem. It's executed well with a skippy-happy rhythm. I wouldn't chaange a word.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Wow thanks so much, I appreciate the sixer and choice review. Apologies for tardy response. Way behind. I really enjoyed your review. Have a great day.
Closet
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Penpal
Lol, I'm giving this a perfect six 'cause not only did it entertain me, but it was well thought out, very unique, and well written. I loved the picture, quite appropriate for the wonderful theme. Yes, we are all victims of the intrusive lint. hehehehe.
Great job, and fun to read.
Pen
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Lol, I'm giving this a perfect six 'cause not only did it entertain me, but it was well thought out, very unique, and well written. I loved the picture, quite appropriate for the wonderful theme. Yes, we are all victims of the intrusive lint. hehehehe.
Great job, and fun to read.
Pen
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Wow thanks so much. I appreciate the sixer and charming review. Apologies for late response...Yes it seems we are all victims of lint except the percentage with "outey's" (belly buttons)...then again they would not escape other types of lint I suppose. Thanks again.
Closet
Comment from Patrick M. Shaw
Chuckling . . . this is great! Word choices, turns of phrase, rhythm and rhyme all excellent, humorously describing an annoying scenario with which we're all familiar. Good job :-)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Chuckling . . . this is great! Word choices, turns of phrase, rhythm and rhyme all excellent, humorously describing an annoying scenario with which we're all familiar. Good job :-)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much glad you enjoyed.
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Comment from snoopy lover
Well, the subject of this poem is quite unlike anything I have read recently---but I still really liked it. Great choice of words. Your rhyme and meter made for easy reading and good flow. All fun! Karen
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Well, the subject of this poem is quite unlike anything I have read recently---but I still really liked it. Great choice of words. Your rhyme and meter made for easy reading and good flow. All fun! Karen
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thanks very much...I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Closet
Comment from Chris Tee
I should imagine it is not your belly button we have here old sport.
An absolutely marvelous piece we have here old spot.
Well done with this splendid write here old girl.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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I should imagine it is not your belly button we have here old sport.
An absolutely marvelous piece we have here old spot.
Well done with this splendid write here old girl.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Thanks Chris I appreciate your delightful review.
Closet xo
Comment from Warren Rodgers
CPJ!
Holy Lint how fast did you write this LOLOL! Love it! See you just proved me right LOLOL. I'm rolling off my chair on this one. I think you've just about covered the subject and done it in record time (what about 2 hours or so since I made the suggestion).
As I have come to love and expect your rhymes and rhythm are right on and your humor leaves me laughing out loud! And just today, your sixes have been paroled from my fs account. So here ya go Six for Lint!
Fantastic writing my friend
cheers!!!
Wazzzaaaa
xoxo
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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CPJ!
Holy Lint how fast did you write this LOLOL! Love it! See you just proved me right LOLOL. I'm rolling off my chair on this one. I think you've just about covered the subject and done it in record time (what about 2 hours or so since I made the suggestion).
As I have come to love and expect your rhymes and rhythm are right on and your humor leaves me laughing out loud! And just today, your sixes have been paroled from my fs account. So here ya go Six for Lint!
Fantastic writing my friend
cheers!!!
Wazzzaaaa
xoxo
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
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Haha thanks Wazza...I am blown away by the response to this one...this was such a cool subject to cover...someone wants me to do the spinach in the teeth ...not sure I'll do it justice but I'll give it some thought. Thanks again for inspiring me.
Cheers CPJ xoxo
