Lint
Yeah, Everyone Gets It ...52 total reviews
Comment from oNray
I get a kick out of this work of art. You got it all and a bag of chips as they say. The rhythm and rhyme and flow of this poem are terrific. Presentation spot on. It was fun!!!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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I get a kick out of this work of art. You got it all and a bag of chips as they say. The rhythm and rhyme and flow of this poem are terrific. Presentation spot on. It was fun!!!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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...and a bag of chips? LOL Haha how cool is that? Thanks so much for a delightful review...really appreciate it. Apologies for tardy response.
Cheers closet
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the localhip deal is to add " and a bag of chips " the meal is complete, could not ask for anything more
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Gotta love that then.
Thanks so much.
Have a nice day, you've just made mine. LOL
I'm off to enjoy the chips. Cheese and Onion flavour me hopes.
x
Comment from adewpearl
Your lines read at a good steady clip and your abab rhyming is strong.
Love the vivid detail and the humor in your descriptions of lint
Nice touches of alliteration in phrases like sweaty skin and good sensory appeal
Love the humor and internal rhyme in can't be shuttin', belly button
Lots of clever internal rhymes add to the humor and to the clipped beat - a most amusing poem, Phillippa :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Your lines read at a good steady clip and your abab rhyming is strong.
Love the vivid detail and the humor in your descriptions of lint
Nice touches of alliteration in phrases like sweaty skin and good sensory appeal
Love the humor and internal rhyme in can't be shuttin', belly button
Lots of clever internal rhymes add to the humor and to the clipped beat - a most amusing poem, Phillippa :-) Brooke
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks Brooke. Most appreciated. So glad you enjoyed.
Cheers Phillippa xoxo
Comment from BothePo8
Hahahahaha! Way to go Jester! Another beauty! I love this cutie...It is another one that we can all relate to...Your choices of rhythm and rhyme are wonderful....You are a master, my friend! I love the belly button! Best wishes, Bo
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Hahahahaha! Way to go Jester! Another beauty! I love this cutie...It is another one that we can all relate to...Your choices of rhythm and rhyme are wonderful....You are a master, my friend! I love the belly button! Best wishes, Bo
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Haha a sixer from the Boetic, thanks buddy...loved your review. Miss you round here...please come back at some point...I haven't read a bloody good Sonnet in AGES.
Cheers Jester
xoxo
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You may not have read a bloody good sonnet but you can sure write them..........After all, you won the sonnet contest, dear Jester...Hasta pronto, amiga mia....( Until soon, my friend )
Comment from WilliamDeen
LOL! I think you could write about anything and make it interesting and fun too! I love this lint poem. It has a good rhyming scheme to it and the cadence is fun also!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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LOL! I think you could write about anything and make it interesting and fun too! I love this lint poem. It has a good rhyming scheme to it and the cadence is fun also!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks Will, I appreciate your delightful review.
Closet
Comment from Ankh
I don't mind some lint....but the hair needs to go lol.
A piece of ducktape should remove the lint and the hair. I would do that just to hear the scream. Good work hun :-)~
Seth x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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I don't mind some lint....but the hair needs to go lol.
A piece of ducktape should remove the lint and the hair. I would do that just to hear the scream. Good work hun :-)~
Seth x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Okay (hanging head) ... I'll shave the hair off.
Thanks very much. Glad you'd like to hear me scream in pain...not sure what that means.
Cheers closet
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Okay (hanging head) ... I'll shave the hair off.
Thanks very much. Glad you'd like to hear me scream in pain...not sure what that means.
Cheers closet
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When the ducktape pulls the hair and the lint haha
I have a sadistic side :-)~
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Oh.
I didnt know that.
Not sure I like that side of you.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, closetpoetjester, a great job writing this poem about lint and the way it congregates to the belly button. mine could probably stock a cotton textile mill.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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this is very well written, closetpoetjester, a great job writing this poem about lint and the way it congregates to the belly button. mine could probably stock a cotton textile mill.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks jax, I appreciate your review...seriously though...a textile mill?? Sounds like there is money to be made...can you imagine wearing a garment made of recycled lint? Bahaha
Cheers closet xo
Comment from Joan E.
Good mid-day from California! What a greeting from your husband's navel, I hope!! Yes, you could and did make "lint" fascinating! ("Chauffeur" is a neat metaphor--I think Evil Eddie tortured the letters.) Maybe you can patent your special comb as the LLL--"lingering" lint lifter! That was inspired by your continuing use of alliteration in the quatrains, along with the rhymes, which you make seem effortless! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Good mid-day from California! What a greeting from your husband's navel, I hope!! Yes, you could and did make "lint" fascinating! ("Chauffeur" is a neat metaphor--I think Evil Eddie tortured the letters.) Maybe you can patent your special comb as the LLL--"lingering" lint lifter! That was inspired by your continuing use of alliteration in the quatrains, along with the rhymes, which you make seem effortless! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks Joan, I appreciate your warm review.
Closet xoxo
Comment from Tawnyowl
Competent humorous poem that tells its tale well. Those pesky balls of fluff are everywhere. This is a poem many people will understand as being part of life. The picture of the belly button was apt and fitting. Another crevice that can trap a bit of fluff. Yes it is a difficult subject to make interesting but you have done just that. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Competent humorous poem that tells its tale well. Those pesky balls of fluff are everywhere. This is a poem many people will understand as being part of life. The picture of the belly button was apt and fitting. Another crevice that can trap a bit of fluff. Yes it is a difficult subject to make interesting but you have done just that. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for the delightful review. Most appreciated.
Cheers closet
Comment from Amina Ahmed
it is very interesting indeed. i like the end
Gripping teeth, provide relief
Through pain-free, lint removal
Redirected, once inspected
Clothes now meet approval!
keep it up
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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it is very interesting indeed. i like the end
Gripping teeth, provide relief
Through pain-free, lint removal
Redirected, once inspected
Clothes now meet approval!
keep it up
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for the delightful review. Most appreciated.
Cheers closet
Comment from despiser
It wasn't the hair that threw me, I was going to ask, did you lose weight?
Well this is done right, thought I was fucked up but maybe that's just...
Oops! You caught me cut n pasting from my reviews received Lol
Seriously cpJ, this is fully deserving of a sixer. Very very clever.
You really know your fluff Lol
-D xo
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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It wasn't the hair that threw me, I was going to ask, did you lose weight?
Well this is done right, thought I was fucked up but maybe that's just...
Oops! You caught me cut n pasting from my reviews received Lol
Seriously cpJ, this is fully deserving of a sixer. Very very clever.
You really know your fluff Lol
-D xo
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Haha, smarty! LOL Thanks for a choice review D and I appreciate your thoughtful review and yeah, guess I AM pretty fucked up to be writing about "lint"...hey, no fair, you are cutting and pasting! LOL Naughty boy. Thankyou for your sixer review and comments. Glad you enjoyed my fluff...you sure as shit know yours!
Cheers cpJ x
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Classic fluff review Lol
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Indeed it was DEE.
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