Lint
Yeah, Everyone Gets It ...52 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
HA to your author's notes because I had the same challenge once from a friend about "dust" ("The Panache of Dust") You are so much fun to follow. I love our fanship and again apologize for the many I have missed as of late. My recent posts will explain. EXCELLENT as always
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2011
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HA to your author's notes because I had the same challenge once from a friend about "dust" ("The Panache of Dust") You are so much fun to follow. I love our fanship and again apologize for the many I have missed as of late. My recent posts will explain. EXCELLENT as always
Comment Written 18-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much and are you serious...I go check that one out.
I apologise myself for tardiness...I have been flat out and cannot get to everyone lately. Even my bulk reviewing method has fucking turned on me.
Cheers and thanks
Clo xoxo
Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, God, I am totally cracking up! The sixth stanza is my favorite. If you see it on a friend show you care by removing it. Have you explored the spinach in the tooth problem? You know what I mean, should you tell a friend if you're out to dinner and that person has food in their teeth. If you have, tell me the title. If you haven't, please do. I don't think I could do justice to that topic the way you could. I wanted to give you a six for this one, but FS won't allow it. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
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Oh, God, I am totally cracking up! The sixth stanza is my favorite. If you see it on a friend show you care by removing it. Have you explored the spinach in the tooth problem? You know what I mean, should you tell a friend if you're out to dinner and that person has food in their teeth. If you have, tell me the title. If you haven't, please do. I don't think I could do justice to that topic the way you could. I wanted to give you a six for this one, but FS won't allow it. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
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Haha thanks Lou Lou, no I haven't explored the spinach concept...its all yours ... unless you don't want to do it at all...I'll need some thought for that one! LOL Thanks for the thought of a sixer...I really enjoyed writing this one too. Not that I much of a lint picker. I have the special comb remember! LOL
Cheers CP x
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LOL - I suppose we could collaborate but then we'd have to split the stars. I'm serious about you exploring this common embarrassment - give it some thought. But no pressure here...only if the words flow freely. Hugs, Lou
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Oh I can wait til that happens no probs...just need a few thoughts to rub together first...I'll see how I go. Always up for a challenge.
Leave it with me.
CP x
Comment from Dougspoetry
The picture is disgusting, but please tell me that's not your belly! :) You have finally crossed the creative threshold into "Super Poet" status. You really can write a poem about anything. As always great rhymes and imagery.
Many Blessings!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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The picture is disgusting, but please tell me that's not your belly! :) You have finally crossed the creative threshold into "Super Poet" status. You really can write a poem about anything. As always great rhymes and imagery.
Many Blessings!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Haha thanks Douglas and didn't you read the authors notes? Mine is MUCH hairier! Arrrrggghhh... Yeah I know too much info.
LOL Thanks for the Super Poet status...you are SUCH a delight and always support. I appreciate your open mind too...I know I can be a bit out there sometimes...yep, just a tad. Hee hee
Closet xoxo
PS Have a great day as your sixer just made mine.
Comment from Semchuva
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I liked the rhyme and rhythm and most of all the colorful imagery - "soft and springy, rather clingy". The idea of removing from a friend is funny. Just entertaining!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I liked the rhyme and rhythm and most of all the colorful imagery - "soft and springy, rather clingy". The idea of removing from a friend is funny. Just entertaining!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your enchanting review.
Cheers closet
Comment from Writingfundimension
This gloriously funny ride of a poem you've written starts with the picture! What fantastic rhymes, closet. This is one heck of a fab poem. My favorite stanza: 'Yes it flocks, to feet in socks...through special forms of friction...There it goes, between your toes...And flaunts all jurisdiction'. What a great post, buddy. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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This gloriously funny ride of a poem you've written starts with the picture! What fantastic rhymes, closet. This is one heck of a fab poem. My favorite stanza: 'Yes it flocks, to feet in socks...through special forms of friction...There it goes, between your toes...And flaunts all jurisdiction'. What a great post, buddy. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Hey Bev, thanks a bunch for the delightful review...glad you enjoyed. This IS by far the weirdest content I have ever covered.
Cheers closet xoxo
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I loved it, closet. I'd say inspired but you'll just laugh...Xx Bev
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What could you possibly be inspired to write about from this I wonder? Should I dare ask? Bahaha
Someone asked me to cover the spinach in the teeth angle...maybe YOU could do that one! LOL
Cheers lovely lady.
xoxo
Catchupwitchoosoon.
Comment from Jean Lutz
I have found lint comes in handy if the lecture your are listening to is really boring. You can sit and pick and pick. As for the artwork, I won't go there.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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I have found lint comes in handy if the lecture your are listening to is really boring. You can sit and pick and pick. As for the artwork, I won't go there.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Haha thanks Jean...I appreciate your review.
Closet xo
Comment from jackpeg
Marvelous exercise in rhyme and meter, but (ugh!) what a disgusting theme. And you actually took a photo! What did you stick in there? It looks like an olive. O.k., so whose belly is it?
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Marvelous exercise in rhyme and meter, but (ugh!) what a disgusting theme. And you actually took a photo! What did you stick in there? It looks like an olive. O.k., so whose belly is it?
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Yes its a disgusting theme but I can indeed think of worse. Quite possibly the weirdest one I have tackled but a fan said I could probably make lint sound like fun...
Glad you liked my photo...yes...its an olive! Bahahahaha
Strain your eyes Babe, it IS belly button lint...
If it was an Olive I guess I would have appropriately named my poem "Olive" and not in fact "Lint"... therein lies MY wisdom.
Dunno who's belly it is but mine is much hairier so I decided to run with this one...it shows up the lint much better.
Cheers CP xo
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Somehow, I just can't imagine you, or any Aussie gal, with a hairy naval. What's more, I'm not even going to try.
Comment from Minglement
OMG, this was hilarious! I guess you proved your previous reviewer correct - and who would think to write about lint! Every line was great and I love the graphic. Perfect, fun little piece. Loved it. Marcia :)
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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OMG, this was hilarious! I guess you proved your previous reviewer correct - and who would think to write about lint! Every line was great and I love the graphic. Perfect, fun little piece. Loved it. Marcia :)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Haha, you liked it THAT much? LOL Thanks Marci, for a beaut review and sixer,...where do you keep pulling these from...I always feel like you have a private stash just for me, you naughty girl. Loved your review and yes the pic was a hoot I thought.
Cheers Phillippa xoxo
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Yep, I liked it that much! I always save a few for you :) Terrific fun. Who knew? :) Marcia
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
i've searched around
me navel ground
and deep within me button;
i've picked and rammed
but i'll be damned
-i can't find none, nutin'!
is there somefin wrong with me? lol.
an excellent write
that's O so tight
much like Pix's sphincters.
i tried to tell 'er
to get her fella
to squirt up there some linctus...
sorry, i digress a bit,
but that's just how i is;
and now i'm off to get a hit
from me latest batch of whizz...
...byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
warmly, xx, eph.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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i've searched around
me navel ground
and deep within me button;
i've picked and rammed
but i'll be damned
-i can't find none, nutin'!
is there somefin wrong with me? lol.
an excellent write
that's O so tight
much like Pix's sphincters.
i tried to tell 'er
to get her fella
to squirt up there some linctus...
sorry, i digress a bit,
but that's just how i is;
and now i'm off to get a hit
from me latest batch of whizz...
...byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
warmly, xx, eph.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Trust me eph ... you DON'T need the whizz mate! LOL
Love your reviews...glad I found someone with an equally if not MORE twisted sense of hoomer. Funnee boy...thanks for a great review...I'll never think of Pixel the same way again without thinking of this you naughty boy! Haha
Byeeeee right back.
Stay off the f*****g whizz.
Promise?
Cheers Closet xo
Comment from rama devi
LOL--Whoever made that comment was spot on--you did it--superb poem about lINT.
Besides the super-fresh rhyme pairs, I love the internal rhyming and bouncy flow. Clever and creative, whimsical witty lines.
Favorite bits-
Soft and springy, rather clingy
Catches on your clothes (great alliteration too)
Clever rhymes-
Rolled up dregs, on trouser legs
Are visibly annoying
Not accepted, quite expected
Cling-ons are deploying
Balls of fluff, such pesky stuff
As cotton, remnants gather
Sweaty skin, will chaeuffer in
Each crevice, open slather
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Can't be shuttin', belly button
Better check your levels
Holy-moly! Roly-polys -
Shifty little devils!
NICE-
On a friend, I recommend
Remove it if you see it
Show you care, reach over there
Just pull it off and free it
LOL
Well phrased with excellent consonance of F, T and L-
Tailored suits, deserve pursuits
To lift the stuff that lingers
I now own, the special comb
Negating picky fingers
Fun closing stanza, too.
Enjoyed this muchly.
bravo.
warmly, rd
PS Well presented too.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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LOL--Whoever made that comment was spot on--you did it--superb poem about lINT.
Besides the super-fresh rhyme pairs, I love the internal rhyming and bouncy flow. Clever and creative, whimsical witty lines.
Favorite bits-
Soft and springy, rather clingy
Catches on your clothes (great alliteration too)
Clever rhymes-
Rolled up dregs, on trouser legs
Are visibly annoying
Not accepted, quite expected
Cling-ons are deploying
Balls of fluff, such pesky stuff
As cotton, remnants gather
Sweaty skin, will chaeuffer in
Each crevice, open slather
LOL-
Can't be shuttin', belly button
Better check your levels
Holy-moly! Roly-polys -
Shifty little devils!
NICE-
On a friend, I recommend
Remove it if you see it
Show you care, reach over there
Just pull it off and free it
LOL
Well phrased with excellent consonance of F, T and L-
Tailored suits, deserve pursuits
To lift the stuff that lingers
I now own, the special comb
Negating picky fingers
Fun closing stanza, too.
Enjoyed this muchly.
bravo.
warmly, rd
PS Well presented too.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much rd...I appreciate your delightful review.
Closet
