Sounds of Morning
Free style poem for uplifting contest6 total reviews
Comment from Diny
I could feel the gratitude within these words- I could almost see the trees and birds the flag and the sky- really imagery filled- good luck- Write on-Di
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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I could feel the gratitude within these words- I could almost see the trees and birds the flag and the sky- really imagery filled- good luck- Write on-Di
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thank you for reviewing my poem and being so generous with the stars. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Mr.muttley
So when isn't it hot in this dang state??? I love the picture you portray in the first 3 stanzas, so serene and soothing. I found this very relaxing. I could close my eyes and almost smell that cup of coffee. You did a very nice job with the imagery of this poem. I wish I hadn't missed the voting booth. None the less I thought it was an excellent job.
~~~JAMES~~~
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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So when isn't it hot in this dang state??? I love the picture you portray in the first 3 stanzas, so serene and soothing. I found this very relaxing. I could close my eyes and almost smell that cup of coffee. You did a very nice job with the imagery of this poem. I wish I hadn't missed the voting booth. None the less I thought it was an excellent job.
~~~JAMES~~~
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Thanks James. I'm glad you liked my poem and yes, you know how hot it is here in the summer. Unbearable!!!
Comment from elliejean
I like the thought. God speaks through his creations. You just have to listen. Even the hot, hot days have something to say. Good work.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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I like the thought. God speaks through his creations. You just have to listen. Even the hot, hot days have something to say. Good work.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you "got" my message and enjoyed my poem.
Comment from purrfect tale
Very nicely done. I loved all the intertwining of the different elements of nature which, created by God, also help you to hear Him.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Very nicely done. I loved all the intertwining of the different elements of nature which, created by God, also help you to hear Him.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem.
Comment from Kingsland
This poem has richly woven thoughts in words of positive poetic verve. I found this poem to flow smoothly through those words. I liked every thing about this excellent piece of poetic art. It was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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This poem has richly woven thoughts in words of positive poetic verve. I found this poem to flow smoothly through those words. I liked every thing about this excellent piece of poetic art. It was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you John, I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Misrael
A very beautiful poem and well said. We should pray and listen for GODS voice in our hearts and minds. The Bible says to be still and know that I am GOD. Very well put.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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A very beautiful poem and well said. We should pray and listen for GODS voice in our hearts and minds. The Bible says to be still and know that I am GOD. Very well put.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I truly appreciate your comments.
