Wall Street
Power and Influence of Wall Street16 total reviews
Comment from bertodi
How odd that you should have written this
yet are angy with me for telling the truth of another corrupt entity, being protected by the Ministry of Health. However, I do not take sides and yours is a good poem, makes a good point..subject matter remains intact,you keep the piece pure, by the endings, men, towers,numbers, dollars. I am a bit miffed why you resent my writing about the UK corruption as I invariably praise the USA Human Research for being policed properly. At Uni on my several literature degrees, I always learnt that to break rules is permissible in poetry for impact, maybe that is not the rule in the USA.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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How odd that you should have written this
yet are angy with me for telling the truth of another corrupt entity, being protected by the Ministry of Health. However, I do not take sides and yours is a good poem, makes a good point..subject matter remains intact,you keep the piece pure, by the endings, men, towers,numbers, dollars. I am a bit miffed why you resent my writing about the UK corruption as I invariably praise the USA Human Research for being policed properly. At Uni on my several literature degrees, I always learnt that to break rules is permissible in poetry for impact, maybe that is not the rule in the USA.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Wall Street reflects my own opinions about, and formed in the USA.
Comment from elspeth glenn
Excellent use of the Naani form. And what a powerful, succinct message.
Good work! Hope this finds you have a very happy new year!
Elspeth
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Excellent use of the Naani form. And what a powerful, succinct message.
Good work! Hope this finds you have a very happy new year!
Elspeth
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review so long ago! I apologize - I have been away for a very long time, but now I'm back. I hope to have more pieces posted soon.
Comment from Belinda
Wow, a rant in naani form. You've done a good job in this. Just hope the Wall Streeters have time to read this naani and think...
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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Wow, a rant in naani form. You've done a good job in this. Just hope the Wall Streeters have time to read this naani and think...
Comment Written 04-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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Thanks for your kind words of review. Have a great day!
Comment from RYME4U
This is so true. You have used a few words to express how many of us feel.I have never seen a skinny stock broker, have you?
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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This is so true. You have used a few words to express how many of us feel.I have never seen a skinny stock broker, have you?
Comment Written 04-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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Thanks. I'm glad that you could relate! Tricia
Comment from Denise S
Sad but true. I wish something could be done about that. But we have taken these things for granted and we just go with the flow. Oh well
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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Sad but true. I wish something could be done about that. But we have taken these things for granted and we just go with the flow. Oh well
Comment Written 04-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the review and comments! Have a great night.
Comment from purrfect tale
You got the stock market and corporate leaders in one small poem. Very well done! The black and white picture was a perfect choice for the bleakness of the subject.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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You got the stock market and corporate leaders in one small poem. Very well done! The black and white picture was a perfect choice for the bleakness of the subject.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thanks! I'm glad that you could appreciate it. ~Tricia
Comment from seashellrees4
I liked your poem. It made me laugh only because it's better than crying. I agree with your sentiments. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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I liked your poem. It made me laugh only because it's better than crying. I agree with your sentiments. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. ;) ~Tricia
Comment from gazzagodbod
great picture and wonderful little poem started my day with a good feeling thanks and good luck in the contest my friend gazza
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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great picture and wonderful little poem started my day with a good feeling thanks and good luck in the contest my friend gazza
Comment Written 04-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thanks! I appreciate you kind words and wishes! ~Tricia
Comment from writerwish
I like the last line growing fat on your dollars. I think people overestimate the brokers and don't realize they are in this for the money. No real concern for the client.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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I like the last line growing fat on your dollars. I think people overestimate the brokers and don't realize they are in this for the money. No real concern for the client.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thanks. Yes, exactly! I'm glad you get my meaning. :) ~Tricia
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this naani poem about the machinations of wall street and a controlled market. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this naani poem about the machinations of wall street and a controlled market. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thank you! I appreciate your praise and good wishes. :) ~Tricia
