Comment from Betty517

Excellent

Nothing I would rather do
Than sit on the river bank with you

I can almost feel the contentment you feel sitting there. I also love the way you make summer sound like so much fun. A wonderful read.

Betty

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011

Thanks Betty. Just something that came to me on the way home from work. :o)

Comment from cercie

Good

Nice poem and very visual although I'm not sure why the slice of cheese is in quotations. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Cercie

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011

Thank you for your review of my poem. Just fun thoughts that came to me on the way home from work.

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your fun poem about all the summertime things you've experienced and observed, even to the ants getting into the bread. Perfect picture, too.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011

I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. It was just something that came to me on the way home from work yesterday. It was fun to write. :o)