Solitude
Haiku poem27 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Beautiful picture that complements the poem well
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the alliteration of winter wonderland/window
You create a concrete image well through suggestion and you create mood most effectively :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Beautiful picture that complements the poem well
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the alliteration of winter wonderland/window
You create a concrete image well through suggestion and you create mood most effectively :-) Brooke
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thank you Brooke. I feel humbled (after reading your work) that you liked my poem.
Comment from stanzasandstuff
Those three lines are all you have to say, when your children have gone out to play.(from one mother to another) It fits the Haiku critera perfectly and paints a wonderful picture, the photo is nice too. Loved it!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Those three lines are all you have to say, when your children have gone out to play.(from one mother to another) It fits the Haiku critera perfectly and paints a wonderful picture, the photo is nice too. Loved it!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you liked my poem.
Comment from alexisleech
Put together with the visual image, this is very powerful and sums up the word 'solitude completely. I can almost 'hear' the silence which comes with fallen snow! Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Put together with the visual image, this is very powerful and sums up the word 'solitude completely. I can almost 'hear' the silence which comes with fallen snow! Well done!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you liked my poem.
Comment from rashi kumar
Such a beautiful haiku!
the syllable count is spot-on,
imagery is wonderful
and the alliteration adds to the beauty.
All the best in the prompt.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Such a beautiful haiku!
the syllable count is spot-on,
imagery is wonderful
and the alliteration adds to the beauty.
All the best in the prompt.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you liked my poem.
Comment from jpafford
This is a beautiful poem...words and photo...both together create a masterpiece...and such a fabulous message..well done! a sure winner in a contest
joanne
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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This is a beautiful poem...words and photo...both together create a masterpiece...and such a fabulous message..well done! a sure winner in a contest
joanne
Comment Written 17-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you liked my poem.
Comment from Val Crisson
I just want to tell I thought this was one of the best poems in the contest! You made me feel the cold and the isolation of being snowed inon a wi ter day. Your use of alliteration was perfect. I 'm glad it was recognized
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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I just want to tell I thought this was one of the best poems in the contest! You made me feel the cold and the isolation of being snowed inon a wi ter day. Your use of alliteration was perfect. I 'm glad it was recognized
Comment Written 30-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Val, thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind review of my poem. It gives me much pleasure to know that my poems are liked. Thank you for your support.
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You deserve it, thank you for the review on my poem also
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Such beauty. The scenery from the window. However the weather, the impassable possibilities are so possible that solitude abounds consummates this haiku.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Such beauty. The scenery from the window. However the weather, the impassable possibilities are so possible that solitude abounds consummates this haiku.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. I appreciate your gracious rating.
Comment from Charlene0513
A writing prompt addressing the formal attire of white that will adorn our front steps soon.
Proper syllable count and a photogentic picture to boot.
Charlene
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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A writing prompt addressing the formal attire of white that will adorn our front steps soon.
Proper syllable count and a photogentic picture to boot.
Charlene
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. I appreciate your gracious rating. I am glad you liked my photo.
Comment from Bayberry
You were fortunate to be able to view this beautiful vision for real and take the excellent photograph you've posted. Although 'winter wonderland' seems a little trite, I truly enjoyed reading your entry and Author Note.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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You were fortunate to be able to view this beautiful vision for real and take the excellent photograph you've posted. Although 'winter wonderland' seems a little trite, I truly enjoyed reading your entry and Author Note.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Thank you for review and kindly rating my poem.
Comment from WilliamDeen
What a beautiful vision of winter snow from your window! Yes it is solitude with no one outside and no creatures even stirring in the cold.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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What a beautiful vision of winter snow from your window! Yes it is solitude with no one outside and no creatures even stirring in the cold.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. I am glad you liked it.
