Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Part three, Chapter 10"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from RebelRose
Boy, that Bobby is an arrogant SOB. He makes no attempt to hide it. I am worried about Anna. It is obvious this isn't over. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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Boy, that Bobby is an arrogant SOB. He makes no attempt to hide it. I am worried about Anna. It is obvious this isn't over. Great chapter.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
I am writing a book on murdering husbands I think Bobby will be on my list of dead. I think it will be right. I like your piece and I will wait for more.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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I am writing a book on murdering husbands I think Bobby will be on my list of dead. I think it will be right. I like your piece and I will wait for more.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Artasylum
well i applaud you for your subject matter. I had a friend who was murdered in April as a result of domestic violence... i will be happy to follow your book and hope those that read find some help. yours, diana
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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well i applaud you for your subject matter. I had a friend who was murdered in April as a result of domestic violence... i will be happy to follow your book and hope those that read find some help. yours, diana
Comment Written 27-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. My prayers are with you and her family.
Comment from amada
I'm hlsf that the nightmare is over, or so it seems. Very good chapter and lead for the next one. A very good chapter looking forward to the next.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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I'm hlsf that the nightmare is over, or so it seems. Very good chapter and lead for the next one. A very good chapter looking forward to the next.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BPL76
This is a good read
The dialog flows well
I understood what you were
trying to say with
I look forward to reading more
the first read through
Good Read
Good Job
BPL
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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This is a good read
The dialog flows well
I understood what you were
trying to say with
I look forward to reading more
the first read through
Good Read
Good Job
BPL
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from James Tipton
I think this is good, but for me this section lacks action or tension, leaving a rather so-so impression, although at the very end we have that dramatic accouncement from Bobby about punishing her for disobeying him.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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I think this is good, but for me this section lacks action or tension, leaving a rather so-so impression, although at the very end we have that dramatic accouncement from Bobby about punishing her for disobeying him.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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I am sorry you don't like romance novels. Thank you for taking your time to read. I am glad you at least got the points for your time.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
I was on the edge of my seat. Will Bobby get the chance to hurt Anna or will Anna put him out of his misery?? This is a good read. It held my attention. I enjoyed it.Deorre...
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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I was on the edge of my seat. Will Bobby get the chance to hurt Anna or will Anna put him out of his misery?? This is a good read. It held my attention. I enjoyed it.Deorre...
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rudion
You are definitely keeping th suspense and tension of this on high impact. The story remains compelling and credible. So glad a decision was made - the right one - but Anna's fear is clear and justified. Great job.
Rudion
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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You are definitely keeping th suspense and tension of this on high impact. The story remains compelling and credible. So glad a decision was made - the right one - but Anna's fear is clear and justified. Great job.
Rudion
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Van
Nicely written. Clear and concise portrayal of happenings. Vivid descriptions of goings on helped to keep interest from start to finish.
Content: excellent
Flow: easy readability
Mechanics: perfect.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Nicely written. Clear and concise portrayal of happenings. Vivid descriptions of goings on helped to keep interest from start to finish.
Content: excellent
Flow: easy readability
Mechanics: perfect.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind reivew.
Comment from MizKat
Barbara - This is another great chapter. You sure have a way with words and can hold this reader's interest from beginning to end. Bravo!! Kat
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Barbara - This is another great chapter. You sure have a way with words and can hold this reader's interest from beginning to end. Bravo!! Kat
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind reviw.
