Recovery from a Mental Illness
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Comment from poetparman
Very good analysis of mental illness and depression. I have been there when I was married to an alcoholic. It really can be 'despair.' But I love the last line,"I no longer spend my days there." Sometimes its a long climb up and out into the warmth of God's love. We each have a journey and it is part of who we are today. Thanks for sharing yours.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Very good analysis of mental illness and depression. I have been there when I was married to an alcoholic. It really can be 'despair.' But I love the last line,"I no longer spend my days there." Sometimes its a long climb up and out into the warmth of God's love. We each have a journey and it is part of who we are today. Thanks for sharing yours.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Yes, depression and codependency go hand in hand. It is such a difficult cycle to break, but once done I think we appreciate life more! Thanks so much!Debbie
Comment from WilliamDeen
I am so glad you have recovered! I spend an occasional day in the depression place myself every now and then. GREAT POEM!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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I am so glad you have recovered! I spend an occasional day in the depression place myself every now and then. GREAT POEM!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much. I hope that by writing, I can give hope to others~DEbbie
Comment from Espresso momma
How sad to live day to day with the feeling of hopelessness and no escape for so long. I only can thank God for sparing me from such for only by the His grace, there go I. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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How sad to live day to day with the feeling of hopelessness and no escape for so long. I only can thank God for sparing me from such for only by the His grace, there go I. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much. I hope that by writing, I can give hope to others~DEbbie
Comment from ruby.sahay
Well, I do appreciate your forthrightness on the issue. But there is one stumbling block here as I perceive it- there quite a sudden jump from despair and darkness to a new light and happiness. This transition could be better explained in a verse or a sentence or two. The poetic diction is quite in keeping with the subject matter and that is appreciated. Good read though.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Well, I do appreciate your forthrightness on the issue. But there is one stumbling block here as I perceive it- there quite a sudden jump from despair and darkness to a new light and happiness. This transition could be better explained in a verse or a sentence or two. The poetic diction is quite in keeping with the subject matter and that is appreciated. Good read though.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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In my case the change did happen fairly fast, but yes, I could have explained it better. Thank you~Debbie
Comment from bellemarie
A very moving poem of depression, hopelessness and despair, but also of recovery. Everyone likes a happy ending. This poem has the power to help many who are living in emptiness. It is like an invisible hug. Keep on writing on this topic, you do it so well.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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A very moving poem of depression, hopelessness and despair, but also of recovery. Everyone likes a happy ending. This poem has the power to help many who are living in emptiness. It is like an invisible hug. Keep on writing on this topic, you do it so well.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much. I hope that by writing, I can give hope to others~DEbbie
Comment from Bellringer
Debbie, Your poem takes us from the deep darkness into the light of hope and recovery. Very good alliteration in your first line. As your lines before the conclusion are in the past tense, I am sugggesting one small edit: "Emptiness has [had] filled my heart." Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Debbie, Your poem takes us from the deep darkness into the light of hope and recovery. Very good alliteration in your first line. As your lines before the conclusion are in the past tense, I am sugggesting one small edit: "Emptiness has [had] filled my heart." Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you for noticing that . I did change it. And thanks for reviewing too!!! DEbbie
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You're very welcome, my friend. Blessings, Hector
Comment from adewpearl
Gorgeous artwork
Excellent use of alliteration
strong expression of emotion
Good use of abcb rhyming
You relate your rise from the depths of depression in a moving way :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Gorgeous artwork
Excellent use of alliteration
strong expression of emotion
Good use of abcb rhyming
You relate your rise from the depths of depression in a moving way :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much Brook. I hope that by writing, I can give hope to others~DEbbie
Comment from Gungalo
It's wonderful, Deb. You have come such a long ways and you are a poetic star in my estimation. Congratulations on all your accomplishments.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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It's wonderful, Deb. You have come such a long ways and you are a poetic star in my estimation. Congratulations on all your accomplishments.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much. At least I managed to dig myself out of the muck, now I just need to help others do the same!!! Debbie
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Right!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this very well written poem. I am sure God has His hand in recovery. I can't imagine He didn't. Your artwork is perfect for this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for sharing this very well written poem. I am sure God has His hand in recovery. I can't imagine He didn't. Your artwork is perfect for this poem.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much. I know He was helping me along!!! Debbie
Comment from rtoddwatts22
I can definitely relate to every single word of your profound
poem. I was diagnosed with bipolar disorder several years ago
and the empty feelings you describe are so very real. Thank
you so much for giving a voice to this condition and the hope
that is there to manage it successfully. Take Care, Todd
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I can definitely relate to every single word of your profound
poem. I was diagnosed with bipolar disorder several years ago
and the empty feelings you describe are so very real. Thank
you so much for giving a voice to this condition and the hope
that is there to manage it successfully. Take Care, Todd
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I am sorry you have been afflicted. There are ways to live a fairly normal life. As you said, right now I am giving voice to the problem, hopefully later on I can give more specific examples. Take care friend. Never give up hope! Debbie
