What a Way to Go!
Senryu poem15 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Baker
This is a well written Senryu. It describes the author's feelings about the death of his brother. The words say it all.
The syllable count for the Senryu is correct.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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This is a well written Senryu. It describes the author's feelings about the death of his brother. The words say it all.
The syllable count for the Senryu is correct.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from waihekebach
I am sorry if this is your loss.
A lovely tribute and a caring poem.
It takes character to leave this world laughing.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I am sorry if this is your loss.
A lovely tribute and a caring poem.
It takes character to leave this world laughing.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from honeytree
The art work is very telling for these words.
Cancer is not nice to have
I liked the way how this was
written for ones brother.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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The art work is very telling for these words.
Cancer is not nice to have
I liked the way how this was
written for ones brother.
Honey tree
Comment Written 24-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and gracious rating.
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Having had a brother who had cancer
brings back memories of my brother.
Cancer is not nice to have.
Annie
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I am glad you liked the review.
Honey tree
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I am glad you liked the review.
Honey tree
Comment from purrfect tale
Emotionally this poem was filled with sadness, wonder, and acceptance (the final laugh). Technically all the syllable counts were correct. I loved this one.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Emotionally this poem was filled with sadness, wonder, and acceptance (the final laugh). Technically all the syllable counts were correct. I loved this one.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Yes, this was/is an emotional topic for me. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing about your brother and the legacy of laughter and courage that he left this world with. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing about your brother and the legacy of laughter and courage that he left this world with. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind and gracious review. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Serri
This is a beautiful dedication, and what an awesome picture of your brother. I am sorry for your loss, and I thank you for sharing your story in such a brief but powerful senryu poem/message. He would definitely be smiling at this :) Good Luck in the contest. Blessings, Serri
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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This is a beautiful dedication, and what an awesome picture of your brother. I am sorry for your loss, and I thank you for sharing your story in such a brief but powerful senryu poem/message. He would definitely be smiling at this :) Good Luck in the contest. Blessings, Serri
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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You are very kind to write such a kind review. Yes, my brother was/is an awesome person. He is smiling in Heaven, I know.
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You are so deserving, and I am sure he is as well. Thank you for letting me glimpse into his life. Congratulations on your contest! Blessings, Serri
Comment from Betty517
I am so sorry for your loss! Prayers are being sent to your wonderful brother in heaven! He was obviously a good Brother to you! He got points for that!
Betty:(
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I am so sorry for your loss! Prayers are being sent to your wonderful brother in heaven! He was obviously a good Brother to you! He got points for that!
Betty:(
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Yes, my brother was the best. I miss him very much.
Comment from gazzagodbod
great picture complimented perfectly the wonderful poem he looks like he was a wonderful guy loved it thank you so much for sharing it and good luck in the contest gazza
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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great picture complimented perfectly the wonderful poem he looks like he was a wonderful guy loved it thank you so much for sharing it and good luck in the contest gazza
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Yes, my brother was the best. I miss him very much.
Comment from Mr.muttley
Well I know cancer is a cruel thief, But I love the spirit that is projected here. For one to raise their arms and laugh, it must have been a joyful site he saw as he left. What a way to be remembered one I am sure must make you smile despite the loss. My mom although from a different disease died on her own birthday. Her birth-death day we quip
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Well I know cancer is a cruel thief, But I love the spirit that is projected here. For one to raise their arms and laugh, it must have been a joyful site he saw as he left. What a way to be remembered one I am sure must make you smile despite the loss. My mom although from a different disease died on her own birthday. Her birth-death day we quip
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Yes, I miss my brother very much but it makes me smile when I think of him laughing as he left. Gives me much hope and assurance. I'm sorry to hear of your Mother.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a touching poem to the memory of your brother. He must have been such an interesting man. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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This is a touching poem to the memory of your brother. He must have been such an interesting man. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Yes, he was. Thank you for your kind review.
