Detour
Acrostic poem6 total reviews
Comment from BigTomNY
Always nice to get more than expected!! great job!!!!!! Sorry I havent reviewed faster but I have over 130 fans and it seems that they post evryday!!!!! I am committed 100% to being there for all so if it takes me a day or two to review please understand as I read every new post!!!! I will always be here for you and review honestly thanks!!!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2011
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Always nice to get more than expected!! great job!!!!!! Sorry I havent reviewed faster but I have over 130 fans and it seems that they post evryday!!!!! I am committed 100% to being there for all so if it takes me a day or two to review please understand as I read every new post!!!! I will always be here for you and review honestly thanks!!!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2011
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No problem. I appreciate your input and support. I'm glad you read my poem and gave me 5 stars. Your honest review is exactly what I am looking for. Thanks again.
Comment from Laurie Clayton
I have one quick question...do you play the guitar?
You have this labeled as an 'acoustic'poem. (I wondered how that would work,lol)
Back to business, this is a wonderful acrostic poem, with clear imagery. I liked the rhyme of 'delay' and 'display; and the internal/end line rhyme of the final line.
I hope it does well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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I have one quick question...do you play the guitar?
You have this labeled as an 'acoustic'poem. (I wondered how that would work,lol)
Back to business, this is a wonderful acrostic poem, with clear imagery. I liked the rhyme of 'delay' and 'display; and the internal/end line rhyme of the final line.
I hope it does well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Oops, senior moment I am afraid. Guess I should go back and edit. :o) No, I don't play guitar. LOL Guess an acoustic poem could be one accomplied by an acoustic instrument. LOL Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you liked my acrostic poem. :o)
Comment from l.raven
I love this poem. Brings back memories of when my late husband got us lost. We ended up somewhere where the homes were beautiful.He never knew about the place, but said he had always wanted to see it. Got him off the hook. LOL great poem and memories
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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I love this poem. Brings back memories of when my late husband got us lost. We ended up somewhere where the homes were beautiful.He never knew about the place, but said he had always wanted to see it. Got him off the hook. LOL great poem and memories
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your gracious sharing of your memories. I'm so glad you liked my poem. Yes, many times I have found detours in my life and often they have brought so many wonderful experiences.
Comment from purrfect tale
Where is the GPS when you need it! Wonderful feelings in this. Lost and confused while at the same time marveling at the nature all around!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Where is the GPS when you need it! Wonderful feelings in this. Lost and confused while at the same time marveling at the nature all around!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your gracious review. I'm so glad you liked my poem. Yes, many times I have found detours in my life and often they have brought so many wonderful experiences.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
That was a clever acrostic to use detour as your word. Yes they can be a little discouraging at first, but like you pointed out sometimes you run across something that is better than you would have seen ordinarily! Great job of writing this! Good luck with your writing!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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That was a clever acrostic to use detour as your word. Yes they can be a little discouraging at first, but like you pointed out sometimes you run across something that is better than you would have seen ordinarily! Great job of writing this! Good luck with your writing!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your kind review. Yes, my husband likes to say I always want to take the "scenic route". :o)
Comment from mumsyone
Welcome to FanStory! I'm sure you'll like it here. Your acrostic poem is well written. I like the rhyme, and the message is great.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Welcome to FanStory! I'm sure you'll like it here. Your acrostic poem is well written. I like the rhyme, and the message is great.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your gracious review of my poem. I appreciate it very much.
