Comment from Carolyn 12

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thank you so much for your entry. I apprieciate your style and the quick flow of words. Best of luck in the contest. sounds like this could be abother story-The song of the wolf tells the tale of Tecumseh

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Hi Carolyn! Thank YOU! VERY much, indeed. Your enthusiasm is wonderful and I really appreciate it. Susan

Comment from Cheryl Daphine

Excellent

This is an excellent entry. You speak so well in print,and for the first people proudly. I was very much caught up in your story and found it realistic[hum!] and probable. Things could have been very different. I am going to my first pow-wow this fall. Very good share,and best of luck in the contest,you deserve it.:)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

Wow, Daph...you will love a pow-wow. I used to go to the Potawatami Festival every year. I met a man who is full blooded Cherokee. SO interesting, and funny too. He said they really do hate our government. He calls it a red white and blue snake. I tend to agree. Thank you dear, your review is so kind. HUG ... Susan

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Beautifully written, Suse. You did use Tecumseh's words, though, didn't you? In any case, what you've written is very appropriate. Beautiful job. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

Yes, I quoted his philosophys? Should I acknowledge it in notes? I put (") around them. I live just a few miles from Prophets Town, or Battleground, Indiana. So, and I graduated from William Henry Harrison High! ")) S.

reply by N.K. Wagner on 17-Sep-2011

I would mention it in the notes because we have so many people here who are interested in history and they'd find it interesting. :) Nancy

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, susan, a great job writing this story about tecumseh winning the war against the whites. beautiful story you have penned here, i wish you the best of luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

HI Pam! Thank you! I am adopted, so do not know my lineage, but I do feel a connection to the Native Americans....? I wish I could live out west and be in the mountains with just my horse and a cabin. Oh well. I'm too old and tired to try to go now. Thank you Pam. You are the best...xoxo, susan

reply by sweetwoodjax on 17-Sep-2011

where do you live now anyway?

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

HI Pam, I am in Lafayette, Indiana? Battleground is just minutes northeast of us...")

reply by sweetwoodjax on 17-Sep-2011

okay--historic battleground and you and your poor horse's battle.

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

Hey, that's right...I hadn't thought of that...and this continues too. For me...this house is back off the road so that's why they have to use planes. They MUST keep the fight going...THEY MUST think they win. IT's just disgusting. Wish me luck Sweetie? S.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

This is native American, and I liked it.
The Indians winning over the white.
They should protect what is rightfully theirs.
Held my attention all the way.
Seemed very realistic.

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

HI Ine! You are my first to read this! I am not sure if I got it right, but if you like it, I feel better. Don't be afraid to let me know if something sounds wrong? Thank you so much. I really worked on this...but, who knows? LUV ! Susan

reply by robina1978 on 17-Sep-2011

I am alway honest, might give a highish rating, but say what I think. Nice to be the first for a change.