The True Gift
Haiku poetry3 total reviews
Comment from BigTomNY
Beautiful!!!!! I hope you let your husband read this????????????????????????? so he truly knows how much you appreciate him as much as he obviously does you!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Beautiful!!!!! I hope you let your husband read this????????????????????????? so he truly knows how much you appreciate him as much as he obviously does you!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Thank you Tom. Yes, I think he knows how much I love him. He is very special.
Comment from Cheryl In Minnesota
Nice. He, himself, is better than what he created/ gave. He is the real gift. I love the words "picked out." The purple background is a great match for the thistle.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Nice. He, himself, is better than what he created/ gave. He is the real gift. I love the words "picked out." The purple background is a great match for the thistle.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind words. Yes, I love the color purple and the flower.
Comment from waihekebach
Thistle flowers are beautiful.
Haiku need to be set out with 5 syllables in first line, seven syllables in second line, and five syllables in third line.
It is still a sweet poem, but not quite ready for a contest.
Warm regards.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Thistle flowers are beautiful.
Haiku need to be set out with 5 syllables in first line, seven syllables in second line, and five syllables in third line.
It is still a sweet poem, but not quite ready for a contest.
Warm regards.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your comments and pointing out that I had left out a word in the second line. I always run my poems through a counter but obviously need a proof reader beside myself. :o). I have corrected and made the poem 5-7-5.
