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A poem of Faith.

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Comment from BigTomNY
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extremely strong a nd and feeling verse:

The world is crashing down on me.
I cry out and lift my arms.
My spirit joins yours
Praises begin to flow from my heart and mouth

great job!!!!!!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
    Thank you for commenting on this extremely personal poem. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much, justjo. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. It must be very hard for you. I can only imagine what it would have been like.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Yes,losing a child even one of 41 years old to suicide is a terrible thing. One does not ever get over it but we (our family) have learned to cope. Thank you for your comments on my poem.
Comment from LadyBrendragon
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Your poems speaks from the soul and although it has a slightly irregular flow, it is indicative of strong emotions tearing at the soul. your cry out to the Lord as you wait in the silence of night is very heartfelt.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much for your comments.
Comment from rchitwood
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Very inspiring and I really enjoyed reading your poem.I has good emotional images and structure and line flow.Your photo compliments it well.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Espresso momma
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Touching, only your faith could keep you going. I cannot imagine such pain and with God all things are possible. Thanks for sharing this poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Thank you for reading my poem and giving me such a favorable rating.
Comment from Denise S
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I am so sorry to hear about your son. Your poem flowed nicely and the words you chose were just right

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Thanks for your comments. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from barfy
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Well, I'm glad you hear your father... We all pray, even atheists... When you're in the darkest night, up against the awfulest plight, you will call His name... Right?

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Yes, I will. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from The Stranger
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well this is a poem born out of a personal tragedy and I applaud you for the strength of character that is so prevalent in this poem

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Thank you for your kind comments. Yes, there's an old saying. "What does not kill us ..will make us stronger." Believe me, our family has gotten much stronger.
Comment from RileyBond
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This is a beautiful poem. Your word choice is excellent, and you have created great imagery. I was very engaged while reading this.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2011

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
    Thank you your comments mean a lot to me.