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dreams

lost partner

2 total reviews 
Comment from psalmist
Good
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A lovely message, but you need to fix your syllable count. I count 6/8/6. Perhaps the second line could read: missed you now more than ever. Anyway, that is why I gave you a four.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2011

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
    Thanx
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
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Friend this is a very well done 5-7-5.I could almost feel the loss and emotions. Dreams are not always our friend,when they bring painful memories.Very well written.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2011

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
    Thanx a lot...