Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Part one, Chapter 9"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from DebbieLass
I really enjoyed this chapter. You are giving flesh and bones to your characters and the story is flowing well. Trying to start over can surely be hard after experiencing domestic abuse. Good job..
Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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I really enjoyed this chapter. You are giving flesh and bones to your characters and the story is flowing well. Trying to start over can surely be hard after experiencing domestic abuse. Good job..
Debbie
Comment Written 23-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you are welcome!
Comment from rheabug
Great story line for your book. You are doing a great job with this presentation. I admire you for you teaching abilities along with your writing. Such a good job on both.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Great story line for your book. You are doing a great job with this presentation. I admire you for you teaching abilities along with your writing. Such a good job on both.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cynthia Tee
Oh Barbara you brought tears to my eyes. Sometimes I think I am Anna in your story except that I could not have children. Just like I was, she is too scared to accept that good things can happen...scared in case the bubble bursts!!! A great descriptive write once again my dear friend. Hugs and smiles, Cynthia xxx
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Oh Barbara you brought tears to my eyes. Sometimes I think I am Anna in your story except that I could not have children. Just like I was, she is too scared to accept that good things can happen...scared in case the bubble bursts!!! A great descriptive write once again my dear friend. Hugs and smiles, Cynthia xxx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from yacolt
Your characters were believable and you have a nice flowing story. Your writing flows will and you have done a very good job. Look forward for more!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Your characters were believable and you have a nice flowing story. Your writing flows will and you have done a very good job. Look forward for more!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Another well written post, Barbara. Troy's concern is hard to miss, but he's being very good about staying away. I like the relationship that's developing between Michael and Troy's parents. They're good people. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Another well written post, Barbara. Troy's concern is hard to miss, but he's being very good about staying away. I like the relationship that's developing between Michael and Troy's parents. They're good people. :) Nancy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JBCaine
Barbara-
You did it again. Another good chapter showing you have your thumb on the pulse of the good in peoples hearts.
No corrections needed that I saw.
You make the reading pleasant.
JBCaine
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Barbara-
You did it again. Another good chapter showing you have your thumb on the pulse of the good in peoples hearts.
No corrections needed that I saw.
You make the reading pleasant.
JBCaine
Comment Written 22-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rchitwood
You done very good to have struggled I really enjoyed reading your story.So far I seem to be keeping up I have had to slow down soon I am having trouble with my arm I think I am writing to much.Your story has good dialogue and characters.I would recommend it to others.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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You done very good to have struggled I really enjoyed reading your story.So far I seem to be keeping up I have had to slow down soon I am having trouble with my arm I think I am writing to much.Your story has good dialogue and characters.I would recommend it to others.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 22-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from teacherdub
Strong foreshadowing of the future connection between Troy's parents and Michael. Storyline is running smooth and is seemless. Good job maintaining interest level with the addition of the apartment, the money, the car, etc. Makes me want to read the next chapter. Great! td
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
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Strong foreshadowing of the future connection between Troy's parents and Michael. Storyline is running smooth and is seemless. Good job maintaining interest level with the addition of the apartment, the money, the car, etc. Makes me want to read the next chapter. Great! td
Comment Written 22-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
Hello. I didn't see anything to nit-pick about. The story moved a long nicely, though it seems these people who don't even really know this woman are overly generous. So, where do we find people like this? Just curious. I want them to adopt me.
lots of hugs
Book.
P.S. Hope you are feeling better.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
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Hello. I didn't see anything to nit-pick about. The story moved a long nicely, though it seems these people who don't even really know this woman are overly generous. So, where do we find people like this? Just curious. I want them to adopt me.
lots of hugs
Book.
P.S. Hope you are feeling better.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I have had that type of experience once when everything is too perfect and you are just waiting for the other shoe to drop. You did a nice job with this one!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
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I have had that type of experience once when everything is too perfect and you are just waiting for the other shoe to drop. You did a nice job with this one!!! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
