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how many time we apologize without thought
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Comment from
Pera
Dear dacriter, I think your lines are real poetry.You describe things as if they don't concern you but the bitterness speaks about pain deeply in heart.It's a pity that the syllable are not correct.But if you try to do this may be you will be surprised how the diamond could shine.
Pera
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
Comment from
devbhatta
If it disingenuous words forced by a mistake then why should not it be taken seriously?
It is obvious to take lightly any mistake because it helps you to become correct in life.
Thanks
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
Comment from
dragonpoet
This is a well thought out description of an apology. Thought you seem to think most apologies are insincere
You have made a mistakes the form is 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables not 5 words, 7 word, and 5 words.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Aug-2011
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