Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

I liked how you created this one and it certainly had a lot of powerful points to reflect upon.
Overall well done on this one. Packs a punch and leaves the reader deep in thought.
Thanks for sharing
Maureen

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Maureen.
Hugs,Ine

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I love that song :-)
You've put quite a different spin on the words "mad about" LOL
What a great use of listing with strong illustrative examples
High impact social commentary :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Brook.
Warm regards,Ine

Comment from Melspoems

Excellent

I like this, its so simple, but effective.
The line about blowing up flats and causing arguements with neighbours doesnt seem quite right. - maybe "causing" instead of "cause of" or maybe just add a commar before "cause of"

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review once more and thanks for tip, wondered about this myself. Will rectify.
Warm regards,
Ine

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like this poem very much you covered all points.
Loud and clear. I found this to be a very moving poem that touches everyone who reads it.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review once more.
Hugs, Ine

reply by misscookie on 18-Aug-2011

My pleasure.

Comment from KinaSalad

Excellent

Ok I read your poem, yeah, it's like my writing, lack of punctuation, what's that? I want to hear the sound to this. At least I can read it and yes, the boy who killed in Norway. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Kina.
I tried to download the sound, but my computer was getting a funny program, that was difficult to remove.
If you google: I love the Dinah ... version - itis Jazz, not the earliest one.

reply by KinaSalad on 18-Aug-2011

Ok thanks

Comment from empire76

Excellent

Aren't we all mad about the boy! Very good one. Makes you wonder what the world in coming to. Is anyone reading this? I mean *really* reading this?

Just one little edit in the first line:
-I [an] mad about the boy who brings unwanted advertising

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review empire and pointing out the mistake-will correct.

Comment from poetstar

Excellent

There is good rhythm and rhyme to the poem, and a lot said about many things to be angry about. Yes, and when will the boy ever become a man. Thanks for this unique well written poem. I enjoyed it.

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review poetstar.