Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

You have an admirable approach to your poetry. It has a unique flavour. This is such a clever write. I love the all the reasons that you give for being 'mad about the boy'.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Hi, Robina. I found this very creative poem delightful. It's always amazing to me how inspiring song lyrics can be for poets and writers. This was just so fun! Warm regards, Bev

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review

reply by Writingfundimension on 19-Aug-2011

You're welcome.

Comment from Espresso momma

Excellent

Well I think there are many who are mad about the boy or boys who are sick and deranged and do harm to innocent people for no reason. It is sick and very sad. Thanks.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review once again.

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

Very good and I enjoyed reading your poem.It has good creative line flow.It also has good imagination and structure.Your photo goes well with your poem.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Rita.
Blessings for you too.
Ine

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I was confused at first, because colloquially we mean "we really like" when we say "mad about" someone or something. But after the "politician" reference I understood your meaning. I like the timeliness of your poem and your concluding line. -Joan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Joan; I had to check that one with hubby first.Ine

Comment from Matoshka

Excellent

Loved your picture and your words... Simple and direct they were. You are mad at the boy who will never be your man, and all the harm they have done. It just doesn't make sense to me at all. I enjoyed this very much, Blessings

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review once more.

reply by Matoshka on 18-Aug-2011

You are most welcome. Blessings

Comment from WilliamDeen

Excellent

I feel your anger at the boys. Your poem is very well written about lots of current things. It has good cadence. It flows very nicely from one line to another.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review William.
Warm regards,Ine

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

I liked this it was different .... And was very interesting indeed ..... You weaved so much I into this ...... Great imagery as well ..... Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Tammy. Blessings,Ine

Comment from Cassie Needham

Excellent

I really like this poem. You always write such interesting stuff. It is tragic what happened in Norway. He was dressed as a police officer, young people came up to him thinking they would be safe, not knowing it was him who was shooting everyone, and he shot them too. I love the ending, its humorous, adds a light touch to a very dramatic poem.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Needie.
Much appreciated.Regards,
Ine

reply by Cassie Needham on 18-Aug-2011

Your welcome!

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Hi Ine. This poem is very strong and clear and written very well. Yes horrible things are happening and you ask yourself where does it end. The poem has a good rhythm and flow and your anger was very clear. Liefs Fia

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thanks for your kind review Fia.
Yes we all don't know where it will end, but does not sound great just now.Liefs,Ine