Comment from devbhatta

Good

Highly amazed with the presentation. Words are inadequate to express my feeling. Let the sunshine blush each and everyone in this world and create a peaceful morning.

Simply superb.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thank you so much! Really appreciate your comments. This is my first time to share my writing here and it inspires me to do more..Again, Thank you.

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

This is a good entry.
Now to the serious stuff the review
Please be aware that this is a rating, generated from the darn info, pumped into this computer and not yours.
Syllable count...................Spot-on
Flow of piece....................Superb
Rhyming...........................N/A
Content ...........................Sanity prevailing
Presentation stanzas..........Regular
Alliteration/ assonance....... Sweet silverlining.
Final prognosis..................Sane and serene
Total................................. 10/10
Result ...............................Give this five stars
Computed Comments.......This is an excellent poem
Reviewers comments:
Well done here my dear fellow poet, the result is rather splendid and extremely pleasing if I may say so, old sport.
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2011

Thank you so much! Really appreciate your comments. This is my first time to share my writing here and it inspires me to do more..Again, Thank you.