Hunger for Greed
An Acrostic7 total reviews
Comment from Lovinia
I think this is a very clever acrostic.
Flows well and expresses so much of the world's dilemma in so few words.
The image is a fantastic complement to the poem, a satire in itself. Definitely an image of man's greed and vanity. This is clearly understood after reading the poem.
I have only a small suggestion. While this image works well after reading the poem, I fear for those casting a casual glance may misinterpret the image as funny which does not balance with the tone of the poem. My concern is the valuable words of the poem, so well written, may be over-looked.
I mean no offense, and I do understand your thinking using the image. I am only afraid the greatness of this poem will be passed over.
Warm regards - :) Lovinia xo
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2011
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I think this is a very clever acrostic.
Flows well and expresses so much of the world's dilemma in so few words.
The image is a fantastic complement to the poem, a satire in itself. Definitely an image of man's greed and vanity. This is clearly understood after reading the poem.
I have only a small suggestion. While this image works well after reading the poem, I fear for those casting a casual glance may misinterpret the image as funny which does not balance with the tone of the poem. My concern is the valuable words of the poem, so well written, may be over-looked.
I mean no offense, and I do understand your thinking using the image. I am only afraid the greatness of this poem will be passed over.
Warm regards - :) Lovinia xo
Comment Written 13-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2011
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Hello Lovinia, what a wonderful review my friend, I am grateful for your visit and the kind comments, thank you very much.
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Loved the poem. Well done. I will visit again.
Warm regards - :) Lovinia xo
Comment from RYME4U
Well, you had something to say and you said it well! This acrostic is well done. The illustration is very appropriate and the words are so true. Good job!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2011
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Well, you had something to say and you said it well! This acrostic is well done. The illustration is very appropriate and the words are so true. Good job!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2011
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Hello RYME4U, I thank you for the visit and your kind review, glad you liked the poem.
Comment from Denise S
An awesome poem with a very powerful message ,it was well done, I could shake your hand, when you wrote about over breeding. I have been thinking about the same thing and how they advertise so much sex on tv and dont look at what is happening to the people who watch
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2011
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An awesome poem with a very powerful message ,it was well done, I could shake your hand, when you wrote about over breeding. I have been thinking about the same thing and how they advertise so much sex on tv and dont look at what is happening to the people who watch
Comment Written 12-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2011
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Hello Denise, I am very pleased that you liked the poem appreciate your wonderful review and the generous rating, thank you very much.
Comment from Lise Deangelo
I enjoyed reading your acrostic here and I like the message. Effective use of rhyme. Well-matched artwork. Thanks for sharing and best wishes for the contest :) Lise
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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I enjoyed reading your acrostic here and I like the message. Effective use of rhyme. Well-matched artwork. Thanks for sharing and best wishes for the contest :) Lise
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Hello Lise, thank you very much for the visit and the wonderful review, glad you liked the poem.
Comment from Queenise
Love the poem and the facts that you have stated so eloquently in this writing and think you did a good job on the imagery and flow of it. Like the art you used and thought it was a good match to your words. Best wishes in the contest. Queenise
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Love the poem and the facts that you have stated so eloquently in this writing and think you did a good job on the imagery and flow of it. Like the art you used and thought it was a good match to your words. Best wishes in the contest. Queenise
Comment Written 10-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Hello Queenise, I thank you for the visit and the wonderful review, I am pleased that you liked the poem, take care.
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You're welcome. Queenise
Comment from Whym
Mystery Author, I really enjoyed this piece. Your words were direct and meaningful. The had a nice flow as well.
The artwork you used to accent your piece is absolutely perfect.
Great job! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Mystery Author, I really enjoyed this piece. Your words were direct and meaningful. The had a nice flow as well.
The artwork you used to accent your piece is absolutely perfect.
Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Hello Whym, I am glad that you liked the poem, I thank you for the visit and the wonderful review.
Comment from rchitwood
Very creative and I enjoyed reading your poem.It has good imagination and also good line flow.Your photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Very creative and I enjoyed reading your poem.It has good imagination and also good line flow.Your photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 10-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2011
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Hello Rita, thank you my friend, appreciate your time and the great review.
