Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
In the cold light of day, the evidence of Anna's abuse is even more shocking. I'm surprised Bobby's parents were allowed in the house during this. They have no "standing" in the realm of property division. I'm not surprised by their support of their son, though. Well done, Barbara. :) Nancy
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In the cold light of day, the evidence of Anna's abuse is even more shocking. I'm surprised Bobby's parents were allowed in the house during this. They have no "standing" in the realm of property division. I'm not surprised by their support of their son, though. Well done, Barbara. :) Nancy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2011
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I think the mother just butted her way in to make sure Bobby was treated in her eyes fairly. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Barbara another excellent chapter add, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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Barbara another excellent chapter add, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from dbmccarter
Another step in the process of becoming free. This would really be hard to go back to where you were treated so badly. You told this well. Great job. Glad you had a great vacation.
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Another step in the process of becoming free. This would really be hard to go back to where you were treated so badly. You told this well. Great job. Glad you had a great vacation.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
This is another good chapter in you book. I enjoyed the reading of this piece. Another example of what a woman goes through at the hands of her abuser.
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This is another good chapter in you book. I enjoyed the reading of this piece. Another example of what a woman goes through at the hands of her abuser.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from shesms1988
Very Good. I applaud you for the detail and bringing your readers into the story. I felt like i was part of it, and i could almost see the mark from the gun on the floor and the dents and blood on the wall. Excellent
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Very Good. I applaud you for the detail and bringing your readers into the story. I felt like i was part of it, and i could almost see the mark from the gun on the floor and the dents and blood on the wall. Excellent
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Barbara
I have always thought that busy body mother in laws who are blind as bats make the worst kind of enablers LOL very well done chapter I can not wait for Anna to be free of this whole family of abusers and enablers
BLessings
Jenny
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Barbara
I have always thought that busy body mother in laws who are blind as bats make the worst kind of enablers LOL very well done chapter I can not wait for Anna to be free of this whole family of abusers and enablers
BLessings
Jenny
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Thank y
Comment from Cumbrianlass
I was in the middle of this earlier and the website crashed! Anyway, I'm back. This is a great chapter Barbara. This would be so difficult to do - going back there as Anna has done. That Mrs Rodgers is a real nasty piece of work.
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I was in the middle of this earlier and the website crashed! Anyway, I'm back. This is a great chapter Barbara. This would be so difficult to do - going back there as Anna has done. That Mrs Rodgers is a real nasty piece of work.
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I know, I hate it when I have time spending reviewing and it crashes. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from amahra
As if reliving those horrible moments when Bobby beat and raped her in her son's room, along with the bullet ricocheted off the washer, weren't bad enough, Bobby's idiot, and in denial, Mom comes in to foil the packing and moving. I loved this chapter. Reliving those horrible moments with her was heart wrenching. Great chapter. I will keep reading until Bobby gets "What he deserves."
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As if reliving those horrible moments when Bobby beat and raped her in her son's room, along with the bullet ricocheted off the washer, weren't bad enough, Bobby's idiot, and in denial, Mom comes in to foil the packing and moving. I loved this chapter. Reliving those horrible moments with her was heart wrenching. Great chapter. I will keep reading until Bobby gets "What he deserves."
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I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Changeisgood
Barbara, You're doing a great job keeping the tension high. The mother-in-law is a real keeper as far as the story goes. You do Anna's timidity well and I get that she is like that because of her experience of never knowing when the next blow would strike. The father-in-law seems to have a hint.
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Barbara, You're doing a great job keeping the tension high. The mother-in-law is a real keeper as far as the story goes. You do Anna's timidity well and I get that she is like that because of her experience of never knowing when the next blow would strike. The father-in-law seems to have a hint.
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We will see the mother-in-law again. I appreciate your kind review and insight.
Comment from denhagan
This was a very interesting Part three of chapter 8 tho read where Anna and Paul go to the house where Anna used to live to get her things and run into Bobby's parents. The mother's attitude makes it easier to understand why Bobby behaves the way he does, even though it certainly doesn't excuse it.
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This was a very interesting Part three of chapter 8 tho read where Anna and Paul go to the house where Anna used to live to get her things and run into Bobby's parents. The mother's attitude makes it easier to understand why Bobby behaves the way he does, even though it certainly doesn't excuse it.
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I appreciate your kind review.
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You're very welcome, Dennis
