Overwhelmed
Acrostic17 total reviews
Comment from DALLAS01
I can relate to all of these hang-ups. Over the years I have practiced them all to one degree or another. Perfectionism, people pleasing, co-dependence and egotism. This poem reminds that it is a lifetime goal to change what is intrinsically woven into my personality. What a journey.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2011
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I can relate to all of these hang-ups. Over the years I have practiced them all to one degree or another. Perfectionism, people pleasing, co-dependence and egotism. This poem reminds that it is a lifetime goal to change what is intrinsically woven into my personality. What a journey.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2011
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Me too!!! Fortunately, I now realize what I am doing and don't get so wrapped up in things that it drives me crazy. Thanks so much!!! Debbie
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you're welcome
Comment from barfy
Always amazed, what is it that drives us to pen our thoughts with such passion and vibe?
A vivid and sexy work. Technically stunning.
Thank you... More soon?
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Always amazed, what is it that drives us to pen our thoughts with such passion and vibe?
A vivid and sexy work. Technically stunning.
Thank you... More soon?
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review. There will be more to come!!! Debbie
Comment from mrobi10492
I have been there, my friend. Many many times I have found myself overwhelmed. Great poem. You hit home. The only suggestion I have is to throw in some punctuation. It reads a bit like an extra long run on sentence.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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I have been there, my friend. Many many times I have found myself overwhelmed. Great poem. You hit home. The only suggestion I have is to throw in some punctuation. It reads a bit like an extra long run on sentence.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thanks so much, I'll take a look at that!!! Debbie
Comment from rheabug
This is a very good poem and this is my favorite style at this time. This flowed very nicely and had a good message. Blessings
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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This is a very good poem and this is my favorite style at this time. This flowed very nicely and had a good message. Blessings
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review!!!! Debbie
Comment from Queenise
I thought this was well done and the things you mentioned sure plague a lot of us. We tend to overdo and be trampled because of it. Good description,pace,flow and message. Blessings. Thought the art was so pretty and creative. Queenise
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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I thought this was well done and the things you mentioned sure plague a lot of us. We tend to overdo and be trampled because of it. Good description,pace,flow and message. Blessings. Thought the art was so pretty and creative. Queenise
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thanks so much. Have a wonderful day!!! Debbie
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You're welcome,Debbie. Have a great day. Queenise
Comment from Bellringer
Debbie, Your acrostic provides excellent one-liners of what is meant by "overwhelmed." There is a fine line between challenging ourselves to do better and putting or accepting too much on our plates. At times like these, we need the "Serenity Prayer." Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Debbie, Your acrostic provides excellent one-liners of what is meant by "overwhelmed." There is a fine line between challenging ourselves to do better and putting or accepting too much on our plates. At times like these, we need the "Serenity Prayer." Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Thank you so much and the Serenity Prayer has helped me through many situations. Take care Hector!!! Debbie
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You're welcome, Debbie. Warmly, Hector
Comment from deb552
You mentioned this might be a future work, and you came through quite nicely. I think you've described the feeling of being overwhelmed by carrying the theme through in each line. Not an easy thing to do. I keep seeing myself in your words, for example; "Expecting more of ourselves than is reasonable;" "Wanting to please people all the time;" "Holding ourselves responsible for other's"....yep, Debbie, this is a good one and it hits home. If there were one more "O," I might say, "Over compensating to make things right with another, even if I haven't done anything wrong"....LOL! Great acrostic! deb
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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You mentioned this might be a future work, and you came through quite nicely. I think you've described the feeling of being overwhelmed by carrying the theme through in each line. Not an easy thing to do. I keep seeing myself in your words, for example; "Expecting more of ourselves than is reasonable;" "Wanting to please people all the time;" "Holding ourselves responsible for other's"....yep, Debbie, this is a good one and it hits home. If there were one more "O," I might say, "Over compensating to make things right with another, even if I haven't done anything wrong"....LOL! Great acrostic! deb
Comment Written 05-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Yes, I spent 41 years in the state of overwhelm. I rarely do it now, this time, it sneaked up on me this time. But this week is over and the next one seems a bit calmer. Thanks so much for your kind review and the six stars,Deb!!! Debbie
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Hope you do have a calmer week. I really was impressed with your poem!
Comment from writerwish
Doing too much and expecting too much out of myself, while trying to please everyone. Yup. That would be me. I love this acrostic. It covers all things about being overwhelmed. It is good to reflect on when one feels overwhelmed.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Doing too much and expecting too much out of myself, while trying to please everyone. Yup. That would be me. I love this acrostic. It covers all things about being overwhelmed. It is good to reflect on when one feels overwhelmed.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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I spent most of the first 41 years of my life in overwhelm. I generally manage to avoid it, just agreed to do a few too many things the last couple weeks. But they are over, and I'm looking forward to a relaxing weekend. Thanks so much!!! Debbie
Comment from sasil
You DID do an acrostic of "overwhelmed", as promised. Good one too! I like how you define each scenario and have it apply directly to the narrator, though readers are sure to recognize themselves in several lines. This is some pretty cool art too--looks like seashells or those flat, papery seed pods on some plants growing wild in my yard. I can relate to much of your words here and feel your frustration at the limits of time and ability....and I'm relieved you recognize how unfair and unreasonable this self-inflicted heaping can be. I'll say a prayer for ya tonight that all goes smoothly in your transitions. Best regards--S.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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You DID do an acrostic of "overwhelmed", as promised. Good one too! I like how you define each scenario and have it apply directly to the narrator, though readers are sure to recognize themselves in several lines. This is some pretty cool art too--looks like seashells or those flat, papery seed pods on some plants growing wild in my yard. I can relate to much of your words here and feel your frustration at the limits of time and ability....and I'm relieved you recognize how unfair and unreasonable this self-inflicted heaping can be. I'll say a prayer for ya tonight that all goes smoothly in your transitions. Best regards--S.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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Yes, I did. It reminded me of how crazy my life used to be. I got most of my class assignment gone, so feel less pressure tonight. Thanks for the review and prayer!!! Debbie
Comment from barkingdog
These are the pitfalls of a high achiever, one who wants to do it all and get it right.
Stepping back when you feel the power, the rush, is difficult but necessary. Watch others for the clues, they'll always show signs to warn you of it's time to slow things down, share the reigns, or say 'no'.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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These are the pitfalls of a high achiever, one who wants to do it all and get it right.
Stepping back when you feel the power, the rush, is difficult but necessary. Watch others for the clues, they'll always show signs to warn you of it's time to slow things down, share the reigns, or say 'no'.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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How true. I've spent much of my life being an overachiever, but thought I was cured. However this week, I am feeling it again. Our new mental health wellness center opened Monday, I just started a therapeutic writing class (online) through Iowa State University which also involves reviewing work of the other students in addition to my regular writing class and Fanstory. Friday night I plan to crash and not do anything!!! Debbie
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Just be careful with taking on too much. When over loaded, we tend to push others who can not catch up. If they slow us down we can become very pushy and almost bully them. They are doing the best that they can at their level. We can't expect them to keep pace with us, so we have to lay back and wait for them to catch up. I usually had another project going while the first project staff was 'catching up.' LOL
