Comment from Vintage Ken

Good

This poem captures the essence of the spirit of a child- which is to dare and to do. Effectively put within so small a confine. well done

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2011

Thanks.

Comment from Joyce Crowe

Excellent

excellent description of your grandaughter in such few words. To have the energy and enthusiasm of a youg girl striving to be a ballerina.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2011

Thanks.

Comment from Denise S

Excellent

A really great way to describe what a ballerina does with just a few words. A lot of creativity was shown. The rhymes added spice and the flow was good.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2011

Thanks.