Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Part one, Chapter 8"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb
Love the story about the flower( The Indian Blanket) and the way Troy presented the flower it to Anna
Now you have a great time and pleas get loads of relaxation.
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Hi Barb
Love the story about the flower( The Indian Blanket) and the way Troy presented the flower it to Anna
Now you have a great time and pleas get loads of relaxation.
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and well wishes.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from denhagan
This was a very interesting Part One of Chapter 8 to read about Troy and Anna talking together at his parents' house. I liked how he encouraged her by telling her the story of the maiden and the flower.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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This was a very interesting Part One of Chapter 8 to read about Troy and Anna talking together at his parents' house. I liked how he encouraged her by telling her the story of the maiden and the flower.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Dennis
Comment from Shirley McLain
This was a nice relaxed chapter and as always you did an excellent job. I liked the legend of the Indian blanket flower. I hadn't heard it before.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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This was a nice relaxed chapter and as always you did an excellent job. I liked the legend of the Indian blanket flower. I hadn't heard it before.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. The first one was real, the second one Troy made up.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara. I've enjoyed the Indian stories, and how the made-up one correlates closely to Anna. I bet the whole family follow the 'rules' you've shared with us in your author notes. This is a delight to read. (Enjoy your final summer vacation days ...)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Hi, Barbara. I've enjoyed the Indian stories, and how the made-up one correlates closely to Anna. I bet the whole family follow the 'rules' you've shared with us in your author notes. This is a delight to read. (Enjoy your final summer vacation days ...)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Another great piece of work here.
Wonderful to see a budding Anna, asking her own inner questions.
Yes loved it like all the rest.
Loved your husbands talented artwork.
Thanks for sharing both.
Maureen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Another great piece of work here.
Wonderful to see a budding Anna, asking her own inner questions.
Yes loved it like all the rest.
Loved your husbands talented artwork.
Thanks for sharing both.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. If you want to see anymore of his artwork, his site is brwartwork.com
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Thank you I shall have a visit when I have some time.
Hugs
Maureen
Comment from Earthwriter
Indian blankets I don't believe i have ever heard the term i liked this piece it flowed with ease and held my attention well nice job
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Indian blankets I don't believe i have ever heard the term i liked this piece it flowed with ease and held my attention well nice job
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Apparently the Indian Blankets aren't the only flowers blooming in this chapter. It's easy to see the growing attraction between Troy and Anna. The stories Troy told about the flowers were romantically perfect.
I have a question about the following dialog:
"No. One of the rules is I don't use the phone and I don't have a cellphone. My purse and briefcase are at the house. I don't have your number."
"I'll correct that." He removed a card from his wallet and handed it to her. "Anytime you need something call. I'm serious." {This dialog may need some work. Troy's number still won't do Anna any good because she still can't use the house phone or does she have a cell phone with her.}
Have a nice vacation. I'm sure you need it. I wish we could visit our four great grandchildren, but for now they live too far away.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Hi Barbara:)
Apparently the Indian Blankets aren't the only flowers blooming in this chapter. It's easy to see the growing attraction between Troy and Anna. The stories Troy told about the flowers were romantically perfect.
I have a question about the following dialog:
"No. One of the rules is I don't use the phone and I don't have a cellphone. My purse and briefcase are at the house. I don't have your number."
"I'll correct that." He removed a card from his wallet and handed it to her. "Anytime you need something call. I'm serious." {This dialog may need some work. Troy's number still won't do Anna any good because she still can't use the house phone or does she have a cell phone with her.}
Have a nice vacation. I'm sure you need it. I wish we could visit our four great grandchildren, but for now they live too far away.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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I will think about that dialogue. I wanted to remind readers about the phone and bring up that Anna doesn't have her purse. HUMMMM, thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lola29
Okay, I'm falling love with Troy, and I love the story about the Indian maiden, who was trying to find her strength. It's a perfect story for Anna.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Okay, I'm falling love with Troy, and I love the story about the Indian maiden, who was trying to find her strength. It's a perfect story for Anna.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amahra
Oh you tell such a beautiful story. I love the stories Troy tells Anna about the Indian baskets and flowers. That is such a tender moment. And I can see your husband's artwork on my wall. It's very beautiful. Here in Maryland, we have, every year, an event called ArtScape for undiscovered writers and artist.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Oh you tell such a beautiful story. I love the stories Troy tells Anna about the Indian baskets and flowers. That is such a tender moment. And I can see your husband's artwork on my wall. It's very beautiful. Here in Maryland, we have, every year, an event called ArtScape for undiscovered writers and artist.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kindness. If you would like to see more of Brian's artwork his site is brwartwork.com
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Your newest chapter is beautifully written. I adore Troy and I could tell Anna is falling under his spell of kindness and sincerity. The art work of your hubby's is gorgeous. Brian is a cool name because it's close to Brandon-- my nephew-- who is 17 now and going to be a senior. He's planning to go to the university of UCO located here in Edmond, Oklahoma. We have two universities by the way. I digress to finish your review. I love the Indian maiden story Troy told Anna and he have her a flower-- be still my heart. I can understand her doubts. Troy threw a wrinkle in their sweet conversation when he checked with his mother about the pork chops. I guess a man and his stomach rule sometimes over flirting and love. I look forward to reading more. I enjoyed all your notes about abuse. Have a blessed day and tell Brian his art work is ten stars or A + work.
Love ya...Melissa.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Barbara,
Your newest chapter is beautifully written. I adore Troy and I could tell Anna is falling under his spell of kindness and sincerity. The art work of your hubby's is gorgeous. Brian is a cool name because it's close to Brandon-- my nephew-- who is 17 now and going to be a senior. He's planning to go to the university of UCO located here in Edmond, Oklahoma. We have two universities by the way. I digress to finish your review. I love the Indian maiden story Troy told Anna and he have her a flower-- be still my heart. I can understand her doubts. Troy threw a wrinkle in their sweet conversation when he checked with his mother about the pork chops. I guess a man and his stomach rule sometimes over flirting and love. I look forward to reading more. I enjoyed all your notes about abuse. Have a blessed day and tell Brian his art work is ten stars or A + work.
Love ya...Melissa.
Melissa.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Missy, is you are interested in more of Brian's artwork his site is brwartwork.com. I appreciate at your kind review and friendship.
