The Ballad of a Vision
Heaven as a Mountain Stream22 total reviews
Comment from mountainwriter49
Alvin,
This is stunning and so very meaningful and beautiful.
I can't find al of the adjectives to describe how this
piece of art touched me. So very well done--one
of your best.
I admire your alternating syllable counts in the
lines as I think it helps keep the read light and airy.
Well done.
Ray
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Alvin,
This is stunning and so very meaningful and beautiful.
I can't find al of the adjectives to describe how this
piece of art touched me. So very well done--one
of your best.
I admire your alternating syllable counts in the
lines as I think it helps keep the read light and airy.
Well done.
Ray
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a kind and generous review.
Comment from c_lucas
An excellent writing about Faith. This has a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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An excellent writing about Faith. This has a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review.
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You're welcome, Alvin. Charlie
