Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Part two, Chapter 7"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from K. L. Bauman
A hopeful chapter. It's good to know there ar actually people out there like this that can help and are willing to do so. I have a feeling Rodgers might pop up again though...
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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A hopeful chapter. It's good to know there ar actually people out there like this that can help and are willing to do so. I have a feeling Rodgers might pop up again though...
Comment Written 24-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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Bobby does show up again. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from MS Writer
I certainly didn't find this posting boring! Well crafted and provided us with necessary information. Obviously your research into spousal abuse has been extensive and I'm finding it interesting. Keep writing.
Michele
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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I certainly didn't find this posting boring! Well crafted and provided us with necessary information. Obviously your research into spousal abuse has been extensive and I'm finding it interesting. Keep writing.
Michele
Comment Written 24-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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I appreciate the review and support.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Sorry, I've been away for a bit and can see I've missed a lot. I will try to go back and catch up in time. Another good chapter my friend. Hope all is well at your end.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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Sorry, I've been away for a bit and can see I've missed a lot. I will try to go back and catch up in time. Another good chapter my friend. Hope all is well at your end.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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I am glad to see you are back. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from SharonSue
I want this book! Again you have carried the healing process of abusiveness a step closer to getting back on her feet and feeling good about the decisions she has made. Waiting for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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I want this book! Again you have carried the healing process of abusiveness a step closer to getting back on her feet and feeling good about the decisions she has made. Waiting for the next chapter.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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I am sure Anna will have a few set backs, but don't we all. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Money is a problem that everyone has to deal with. I imagine that Anna never had to deal with money. The cost of everything must have shocked her.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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Money is a problem that everyone has to deal with. I imagine that Anna never had to deal with money. The cost of everything must have shocked her.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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Bobby handled everything, telling her she's too stupid to do it. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Freya Seerwing
What a well written chapter. I could clearly see Anna's predicament with her finances and whether she could afford a new flat. I will go and read the rest of this insightful novel.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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What a well written chapter. I could clearly see Anna's predicament with her finances and whether she could afford a new flat. I will go and read the rest of this insightful novel.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from smudge
I like this story. It seems to be giving hope to women in abusive situations that there is a new life after divorse.I like the flow of the words. Even the matter of fact nature of the house hunting isn't boring because the craftswomanship is brilliant.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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I like this story. It seems to be giving hope to women in abusive situations that there is a new life after divorse.I like the flow of the words. Even the matter of fact nature of the house hunting isn't boring because the craftswomanship is brilliant.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Earthwriter
i very much appreciate your voice on this site i think it is so awesome when people strive to make a difference excellent post thank you
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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i very much appreciate your voice on this site i think it is so awesome when people strive to make a difference excellent post thank you
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Joyce Crowe
Good job including those details that show what a woman has to think about as she is looking at apartments. It is imortant to educate your readers and you do it without making it to lengthy or too boring.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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Good job including those details that show what a woman has to think about as she is looking at apartments. It is imortant to educate your readers and you do it without making it to lengthy or too boring.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey,
Well written with its ability to draw the reader in and cause him to sympathize with Anna. Use of dialogue solidifies the position of all in the story.
You may wish to edit this:
average electric bill is about $200 [per] month.
Duane
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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barbara.wilkey,
Well written with its ability to draw the reader in and cause him to sympathize with Anna. Use of dialogue solidifies the position of all in the story.
You may wish to edit this:
average electric bill is about $200 [per] month.
Duane
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2011
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Thank you for catching that. I have taken care of it.
