Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Part one. Chapter 7"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ....
I enjoyed reading this chapter of your book and have not listed the few changes that I would recommend because, for the most part, I have mentioned them in previous chapters.
Anna is certainly blessed to have such friends as Troy and his parents, as well as his Aunt Margaret.
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Hullo Barbara ....
I enjoyed reading this chapter of your book and have not listed the few changes that I would recommend because, for the most part, I have mentioned them in previous chapters.
Anna is certainly blessed to have such friends as Troy and his parents, as well as his Aunt Margaret.
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I guess I constitantly make the same mistakes.
Comment from MS Writer
You have described the intricacies of the paper work involved in someone beginning the process of leaving an abusive situation. It obviously is not easy and takes a lot of help after the abused person makes the initial decision to leave. Very well done and an interesting read. Your notes are always very helpful.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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You have described the intricacies of the paper work involved in someone beginning the process of leaving an abusive situation. It obviously is not easy and takes a lot of help after the abused person makes the initial decision to leave. Very well done and an interesting read. Your notes are always very helpful.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
Hi, Barbara. It is great that you have listed the different kinds of abuse. The chapter held my interest, too. It was not good for her bring up her ex behavior as a comparison. He certainly wasn't an example of a good man. Just because he was a poor excuse for a man doesn't mean all men are like him.
"Bobby never babysat. He said it was a waste of time and women's work..."
Anyway, it is well written. April
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Hi, Barbara. It is great that you have listed the different kinds of abuse. The chapter held my interest, too. It was not good for her bring up her ex behavior as a comparison. He certainly wasn't an example of a good man. Just because he was a poor excuse for a man doesn't mean all men are like him.
"Bobby never babysat. He said it was a waste of time and women's work..."
Anyway, it is well written. April
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I brought it up because to show the frame of mind she has and that she needs a lot of growth during this novel. I hope to show her growth.
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You're welcome, Barbara. April
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, I'm glad everybody loves Anna and willing to give a hand to her convenience. Only I'm afraid this is too good to be true ... :) This is a wonderful chapter and a delight to read.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Hi, Barbara, I'm glad everybody loves Anna and willing to give a hand to her convenience. Only I'm afraid this is too good to be true ... :) This is a wonderful chapter and a delight to read.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I agree. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
This is an excellent chapter where Paul lays out the plans for Anna and encourages her to rebuild her life. I'm sure the hearing for Bobby's crimes will be difficult for Anna.
I enjoyed this read and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Barbara,
This is an excellent chapter where Paul lays out the plans for Anna and encourages her to rebuild her life. I'm sure the hearing for Bobby's crimes will be difficult for Anna.
I enjoyed this read and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I'm no expert being a reviewer; all I know i didn't find one boring thing in this chapter.
I have learned things I never knew about divorce and wife abuse.
I just hope what Anna's lawyer told her will work out.
Gert
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Hello Barb
I'm no expert being a reviewer; all I know i didn't find one boring thing in this chapter.
I have learned things I never knew about divorce and wife abuse.
I just hope what Anna's lawyer told her will work out.
Gert
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I hope it works out for Anna too. I appreciate your kind reivew.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I was glad to see you posted another chapter of this book and I wasn't disappointed with it. Anna is so lucky to have met Troy and now his family is willing to help her an anyway they can. I am sure she is a bit overwhelmed not mention grateful. I fear Bobby will want to take revenge and wonder what he will do. Very good chapter....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Hi Barbara,
I was glad to see you posted another chapter of this book and I wasn't disappointed with it. Anna is so lucky to have met Troy and now his family is willing to help her an anyway they can. I am sure she is a bit overwhelmed not mention grateful. I fear Bobby will want to take revenge and wonder what he will do. Very good chapter....blessings, chey
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
part one chapter seven or 22 on FanStory is wonderfully written. They will all have to try and help Anna realize what her soon to be ex louse of an abusive spouse is no good and stay away from him. Abusers always say they will change and they never do, not without acknowledging they're abusive. They always deny their behavior to others or blame their 'spouse', 'girlfriend' or they blame it on who they were raise. But a person can break that chain of abuse, if not I say stay away from them. I'd rather live in squallier than be involved with an 'abusive man.' There are also women who are abusive too. I digress, your dialogue is so realistic. I really enjoy this story, despite the subject matter because folks physically or sexually abusing the one's they claim to love makes me mad and shame on women who stand idly by and allow their spouse or significant other abuse their kids. Hell if someone dared to lay an hand on my nephew, Brandon, they'd be looking at the business end of my Glock 9mm. I'd recommend that chapter to other reviewers as a 'must' read. I look forward to another chapter, my talented friend. Thanks for reading my controversial ode to the F word. I say that because we have many spiritually minded folks on this site, but my writing caters to every person that's why I write on subjects from If I were a pickle to my Missy the Mouth Blog Show Garden Chat. I wish you a happy and healthy weekend. Love ya...Melissa.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Barbara,
part one chapter seven or 22 on FanStory is wonderfully written. They will all have to try and help Anna realize what her soon to be ex louse of an abusive spouse is no good and stay away from him. Abusers always say they will change and they never do, not without acknowledging they're abusive. They always deny their behavior to others or blame their 'spouse', 'girlfriend' or they blame it on who they were raise. But a person can break that chain of abuse, if not I say stay away from them. I'd rather live in squallier than be involved with an 'abusive man.' There are also women who are abusive too. I digress, your dialogue is so realistic. I really enjoy this story, despite the subject matter because folks physically or sexually abusing the one's they claim to love makes me mad and shame on women who stand idly by and allow their spouse or significant other abuse their kids. Hell if someone dared to lay an hand on my nephew, Brandon, they'd be looking at the business end of my Glock 9mm. I'd recommend that chapter to other reviewers as a 'must' read. I look forward to another chapter, my talented friend. Thanks for reading my controversial ode to the F word. I say that because we have many spiritually minded folks on this site, but my writing caters to every person that's why I write on subjects from If I were a pickle to my Missy the Mouth Blog Show Garden Chat. I wish you a happy and healthy weekend. Love ya...Melissa.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and friendship.
Comment from The Stranger
I am extremeley impressed by the level of excellence that seems to come naturally to this author, even now I cannot rest wasy in the knowledge that Bobby wont get his grips into Anna and Michael
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I am extremeley impressed by the level of excellence that seems to come naturally to this author, even now I cannot rest wasy in the knowledge that Bobby wont get his grips into Anna and Michael
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Bobby will make an appearance. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
My dear, we need to have a talk - I love the Mom. She sure knows that Anna needs to be set straight since her expectations are so skewed from being married to Bobby. Excellent dialogue throughout - you're always good at conveying your characters' emotions well through their conversations. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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My dear, we need to have a talk - I love the Mom. She sure knows that Anna needs to be set straight since her expectations are so skewed from being married to Bobby. Excellent dialogue throughout - you're always good at conveying your characters' emotions well through their conversations. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your support and kind review.
