Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Part 2 Chapter 6"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Janie King
Oh no, now I have to wait to see if it "she." This is well written and definitely has my attention. Oh, this is so complex..how to innoncent abused women protect themselves and their children. Good job. God bless.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Oh no, now I have to wait to see if it "she." This is well written and definitely has my attention. Oh, this is so complex..how to innoncent abused women protect themselves and their children. Good job. God bless.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
You chose a good time to break off your post. What does Aunt Margaret want. I don't think Troy is shopping around. Very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
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You chose a good time to break off your post. What does Aunt Margaret want. I don't think Troy is shopping around. Very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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You're welcome,Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Helen Tan
I think they're smart to think of getting the tavern owner to press charges. It'll definitely buy Anna time and some peace. This is turning into a true family involvement.
Anyway to know how much more time she can be missing
Here you need to put "Any ways" - two words as you mean any methods of knowing.
Margaret stepped outside and motioned with her right hand to someone.
Great hook - I think it's Anna!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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I think they're smart to think of getting the tavern owner to press charges. It'll definitely buy Anna time and some peace. This is turning into a true family involvement.
Anyway to know how much more time she can be missing
Here you need to put "Any ways" - two words as you mean any methods of knowing.
Margaret stepped outside and motioned with her right hand to someone.
Great hook - I think it's Anna!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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I made that change. Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from sailaway7289
Nice chapter! A person I knew who was domestically abused to the point of being hospitalized was told over and over "You are so dumb and ugly, you should be thankful I pay attention to you - nobody else ever would." among other things. She really believed she was a disgusting person no one could possibly love. Broke my heart. Today she is quite successful and happy.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Nice chapter! A person I knew who was domestically abused to the point of being hospitalized was told over and over "You are so dumb and ugly, you should be thankful I pay attention to you - nobody else ever would." among other things. She really believed she was a disgusting person no one could possibly love. Broke my heart. Today she is quite successful and happy.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and insight.
Comment from missyvamp
You said in your author's notes just what I was going to say...abused women often stay because their abusers threaten the children or other family members. It is truly tragic, and a difficult situation for a woman to get out of. I hope your story has a happy ending...
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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You said in your author's notes just what I was going to say...abused women often stay because their abusers threaten the children or other family members. It is truly tragic, and a difficult situation for a woman to get out of. I hope your story has a happy ending...
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and insight.
Comment from Belinda
Oh wow ... what an ending, Barbara. What's Aunt Margaret up to, and who's that someone? Anna? Ah, maybe not so fast. I know I will have to wait for the next chapter/part. This one, as always, is interesting to follow with eager eyes ...:)
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Oh wow ... what an ending, Barbara. What's Aunt Margaret up to, and who's that someone? Anna? Ah, maybe not so fast. I know I will have to wait for the next chapter/part. This one, as always, is interesting to follow with eager eyes ...:)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb You have a very good way of leaving a reader in suspense
I just hope and pray the person his aunt is pointing at is Anna?
Maybe it just my wishful thinking.
Yes, you have another well written chapter for you book
See you soon?
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Hi Barb You have a very good way of leaving a reader in suspense
I just hope and pray the person his aunt is pointing at is Anna?
Maybe it just my wishful thinking.
Yes, you have another well written chapter for you book
See you soon?
Gert
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from lola29
Ooh, the mystery is building. I can't wait to read what Margaret has to say. I'm wondering why Bobby's attorney has not considered that maybe Anna was kidnapped herself.
I'll be (in) touch tomorrow
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Ooh, the mystery is building. I can't wait to read what Margaret has to say. I'm wondering why Bobby's attorney has not considered that maybe Anna was kidnapped herself.
I'll be (in) touch tomorrow
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for catching that. I made the change just before I posted. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
I love Troy's dad as much as I love Troy - nothing like a determined and resourceful man who's also on the side of the angels :-)
Oh, that is one intriguing ending - you know who I'm hoping that someone is:-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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I love Troy's dad as much as I love Troy - nothing like a determined and resourceful man who's also on the side of the angels :-)
Oh, that is one intriguing ending - you know who I'm hoping that someone is:-) Brooke
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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I am hoping it's Anna myself. We both will have to wait and see. I appreciate your kind review and support.
