Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Part 2 Chapter 6"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from missy98writer
Oh Barbara you naughty writer for leaving the reader in suspense. I think Aunt Margaret caught Troy to tell him she found Anna . Once again you 've written an excellent chapter, my friend. I look forward with baited breath for your next chapter. I have gas tonight from eating a raw vadila onion slice on my grilled hamburger at lunch. The onion wasn't string but sweet. I also ate a marinated salad with strawberries, blackberries, valdila onion slivers, squash, zucchini and herbs covered in a homemade vinagerett made with light virgin olive oil and balsamic vinegar with a pinch of sugar, fresh cracked pepper and sea salt. It's better when it marinates. I digress to congratulate you on an exciting read.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Oh Barbara you naughty writer for leaving the reader in suspense. I think Aunt Margaret caught Troy to tell him she found Anna . Once again you 've written an excellent chapter, my friend. I look forward with baited breath for your next chapter. I have gas tonight from eating a raw vadila onion slice on my grilled hamburger at lunch. The onion wasn't string but sweet. I also ate a marinated salad with strawberries, blackberries, valdila onion slivers, squash, zucchini and herbs covered in a homemade vinagerett made with light virgin olive oil and balsamic vinegar with a pinch of sugar, fresh cracked pepper and sea salt. It's better when it marinates. I digress to congratulate you on an exciting read.
Melissa.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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You made me hungry. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from amahra
I'm guilty of not keeping up, but I'll soon fixed that. I liked this chapter; I particularly like the way you write in the thoughts and how you like to leave us guessing who's on the other side of doors.
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I'm guilty of not keeping up, but I'll soon fixed that. I liked this chapter; I particularly like the way you write in the thoughts and how you like to leave us guessing who's on the other side of doors.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, but you left me hanging in a crucial part. you're so mean to do that to me. i hope it's going to be anna.
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this is very well written, barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, but you left me hanging in a crucial part. you're so mean to do that to me. i hope it's going to be anna.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
I have read other chapters of this, and I always marvel at how well the story unfolds. I always find something new and that I like Troy really interested in Anna. I think this will yield good fruit. Congratulations Barbara, as always, excellent!
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I have read other chapters of this, and I always marvel at how well the story unfolds. I always find something new and that I like Troy really interested in Anna. I think this will yield good fruit. Congratulations Barbara, as always, excellent!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from ElJGreen
I think this is well written. I haven't been on this site in quite awhile and Im not sure ive read your stuff before. I will have to go back reread so I get a better feel for the characters. It made me interested to read more!
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I think this is well written. I haven't been on this site in quite awhile and Im not sure ive read your stuff before. I will have to go back reread so I get a better feel for the characters. It made me interested to read more!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind reivew.
Comment from Jen Gentry
This chapter is very well done with realistic conversation and seamless paragraphs that flow smoothly, I need to go back and read a few chapters tho as I need to catch up on the storyline all in all a great smooth chapter
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This chapter is very well done with realistic conversation and seamless paragraphs that flow smoothly, I need to go back and read a few chapters tho as I need to catch up on the storyline all in all a great smooth chapter
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
has Anna finally resurfaced, is it she to whom Margaret beckons? Will Troy be able to offer her the sanctuary she craves? see next weeks thrilling installment....
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has Anna finally resurfaced, is it she to whom Margaret beckons? Will Troy be able to offer her the sanctuary she craves? see next weeks thrilling installment....
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Good job. Very much enjoyed the way you worked in Troy's thoughts. It was an interesting ploy. You left me wondering if Anna was with Margaret. Of course, I will read the next post to find out. Did not come across any SNAGS or typos.
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Good job. Very much enjoyed the way you worked in Troy's thoughts. It was an interesting ploy. You left me wondering if Anna was with Margaret. Of course, I will read the next post to find out. Did not come across any SNAGS or typos.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Deejharrington
It has to be Anna. His aunt must be with the shelter. Hearing that Everett is making noises about taking her son, she has decided she must come out of hiding. Brilliant cliff hanger that gar-un-tees your readers will have to read the next chapter. Very well done.
deb
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It has to be Anna. His aunt must be with the shelter. Hearing that Everett is making noises about taking her son, she has decided she must come out of hiding. Brilliant cliff hanger that gar-un-tees your readers will have to read the next chapter. Very well done.
deb
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome
deb
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another great chapter for your story. I'm hoping it was Anna who was at the door. You have me hooked good. Great job my friend.
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Another great chapter for your story. I'm hoping it was Anna who was at the door. You have me hooked good. Great job my friend.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
