Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Part 2 Chapter 6"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from jadapenn
Hi Girlfriend, a good progression of the story. I'm glad Paul has decided to take up the case. I hope he gets that SOB Bobby locked away for good. Now what has Margaret been up to? Lots of nice intrigue.
Well done. luv jada
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Hi Girlfriend, a good progression of the story. I'm glad Paul has decided to take up the case. I hope he gets that SOB Bobby locked away for good. Now what has Margaret been up to? Lots of nice intrigue.
Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from rheabug
Reviewing just a chapter of a book is not that easy. I did enjoy the read. It held my attention and perked my curiosity. It seem like it will be a good book judging by this chapter. Good wishes with this undertaking.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Reviewing just a chapter of a book is not that easy. I did enjoy the read. It held my attention and perked my curiosity. It seem like it will be a good book judging by this chapter. Good wishes with this undertaking.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JW
Wow. What a nice hook at the end. You did a great job in writing it and have left your readers in suspense in regards to what is going to happen next. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Wow. What a nice hook at the end. You did a great job in writing it and have left your readers in suspense in regards to what is going to happen next. Good job.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Michelle S
This is a really good chapter. I am just getting into this nover but find it well written, with an important story to be told.
Looking forward to the next post.
Michelle
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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This is a really good chapter. I am just getting into this nover but find it well written, with an important story to be told.
Looking forward to the next post.
Michelle
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ....
This is a relatively short but interesting chapter in your book and, of course, you have managed to make us all eagerly anticipate the next chapter.
There are just two small changes to suggest ...
* You have - I better see who it is ... I suggest -
I'd better see who it is ...
* You have - brought in Bobby for drunk and disorderly.
I suggest - for drunk and disorderly behaviour.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Hullo Barbara ....
This is a relatively short but interesting chapter in your book and, of course, you have managed to make us all eagerly anticipate the next chapter.
There are just two small changes to suggest ...
* You have - I better see who it is ... I suggest -
I'd better see who it is ...
* You have - brought in Bobby for drunk and disorderly.
I suggest - for drunk and disorderly behaviour.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and I will make the chances.
Comment from MS Writer
Very well written. Interesting and suspenseful. It's a story that you can get caught up in because you care about the characters. Great read.
Michele
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Very well written. Interesting and suspenseful. It's a story that you can get caught up in because you care about the characters. Great read.
Michele
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Carolyn 12
Is it Anna with Margaret? Is she there because she feels safe with Troy? Can't wait to the next segment comes out..Thank you again for sharing..
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Is it Anna with Margaret? Is she there because she feels safe with Troy? Can't wait to the next segment comes out..Thank you again for sharing..
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from WilliamDeen
OH what a great cliff hanger you left us with. Why did dad never call?
This is good writing and the descriptions were good. Good additional chapter to the story. Can't wait for the next one.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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OH what a great cliff hanger you left us with. Why did dad never call?
This is good writing and the descriptions were good. Good additional chapter to the story. Can't wait for the next one.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from gsuarez
Curiosity always a great ending, making the reader want more. I am wondering who she motioned to, I am guessing Anna and something is very wrong. Your writing captivates and engrosses the reader. No, it is not just the subject matter, it is your style of writing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Curiosity always a great ending, making the reader want more. I am wondering who she motioned to, I am guessing Anna and something is very wrong. Your writing captivates and engrosses the reader. No, it is not just the subject matter, it is your style of writing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This another good read from beginning to end, as usual. In the beginning when Paul was walking Troy out, he said, "I better see who that is." There was no indication of a phone ringing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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This another good read from beginning to end, as usual. In the beginning when Paul was walking Troy out, he said, "I better see who that is." There was no indication of a phone ringing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2011
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I will take care of that . Thank you for your kind review.
