Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Part 2 Chapter 6"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
I hope you're doing well, Barbara--this a lot shorter than many of your chapters. Still, it holds the reader's attention with fine dialogue and narrative. Well written.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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I hope you're doing well, Barbara--this a lot shorter than many of your chapters. Still, it holds the reader's attention with fine dialogue and narrative. Well written.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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I try to cut my posts off at a good spot. The chapters are too long to post all at once, so my length deepens on the cut off place. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
THIS IS ANOTHER WONDERFUL CHAPTER. WITH LOT OF ACTION... I'M HOPING IT WAS ANA THE ONE WHO WAS AT THE DOOR. A VERY INTERESTING STORY THAT KEEPS ME WONDERING FOR NEXT CHAPTER. GREAT JOB! I'M GIVING YOU FIVE DEAR BARBARA.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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THIS IS ANOTHER WONDERFUL CHAPTER. WITH LOT OF ACTION... I'M HOPING IT WAS ANA THE ONE WHO WAS AT THE DOOR. A VERY INTERESTING STORY THAT KEEPS ME WONDERING FOR NEXT CHAPTER. GREAT JOB! I'M GIVING YOU FIVE DEAR BARBARA.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
I hope she brought Anna or do I? Great pace in moving the story forward. I'm cheering for her. Made me care. Now that is a good writer. Can't wait for more.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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I hope she brought Anna or do I? Great pace in moving the story forward. I'm cheering for her. Made me care. Now that is a good writer. Can't wait for more.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
I am so glad that the story seems to be going in the right direction. If I am right and it is Anna at the door. I can hardly wait.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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I am so glad that the story seems to be going in the right direction. If I am right and it is Anna at the door. I can hardly wait.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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Thank you rht eh kind review.
Comment from denhagan
This Part 2 of chapter 6 was very interesting to read about Troy and his dad working together to try to find and help Anna. At the end, Troy gets a call and a visit from his aunt, who hopefully has Anna with her.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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This Part 2 of chapter 6 was very interesting to read about Troy and his dad working together to try to find and help Anna. At the end, Troy gets a call and a visit from his aunt, who hopefully has Anna with her.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. Dennis
Comment from RebelRose
Well, my mind is going in circles wondering who Margaret has brought with her. I think I know but I'll just have to wait and see, I know who I hope it is. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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Well, my mind is going in circles wondering who Margaret has brought with her. I think I know but I'll just have to wait and see, I know who I hope it is. Great chapter.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from freestoryideas
Really tough subject to deal with. Hope to read more of your work as I am just new to this site. I can see by your writing that you have a brave approach to writing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Really tough subject to deal with. Hope to read more of your work as I am just new to this site. I can see by your writing that you have a brave approach to writing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
What a great chapter. I love the flow I can only guess that Margret brought Anna to see Troy. What a powerful relationship that I feel growing between Anna and Troy. I am going to close with these questions. Will Anna and Troy get together? Or will she move on after getting free of her abusive husband? What a story...
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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What a great chapter. I love the flow I can only guess that Margret brought Anna to see Troy. What a powerful relationship that I feel growing between Anna and Troy. I am going to close with these questions. Will Anna and Troy get together? Or will she move on after getting free of her abusive husband? What a story...
Comment Written 02-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Des Beirne
Well they say you should leave your reader wanting more...
When is the next part coming????
This may seem quite silly but in the UK we woud say 'to' and not 'for'
Later that morning, Troy called in the engineering team that examined the bridge. "Tomorrow I meet with men from Stonewall County. Two people from the Federal Railroad Administration will join us. A cost effective plan to repair the wear-and-tear of the bridge is needed. I'm open for any ideas."
It's really a point to help my own writing, thanks
Des
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Well they say you should leave your reader wanting more...
When is the next part coming????
This may seem quite silly but in the UK we woud say 'to' and not 'for'
Later that morning, Troy called in the engineering team that examined the bridge. "Tomorrow I meet with men from Stonewall County. Two people from the Federal Railroad Administration will join us. A cost effective plan to repair the wear-and-tear of the bridge is needed. I'm open for any ideas."
It's really a point to help my own writing, thanks
Des
Comment Written 02-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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I actually had for there and was told to correct it. Maybe I should go back to for. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from dmjones
Hi Barbara, another excellent chapter. I'm guessing the person with Troy's aunt is Anna but maybe not. I like the way the story is going. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Hi Barbara, another excellent chapter. I'm guessing the person with Troy's aunt is Anna but maybe not. I like the way the story is going. Great job.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
